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Trair Newman

Posts: 14

Dubuque, Iowa, US

Like above ha I just uploaded a new photo an would love some hard honest feed back smile. Cant get better unless you know the weak link, right? tongue
Thank you tongue

Jun 11 14 04:24 pm Link

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Risen Phoenix Photo

Posts: 3779

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

I think this should go to the dust bin and you should reconsider the concept.  There is nothing good about the angle . Shooting a head of hair is not particularly artistic.  Selective color rarely works and in fact does not work here.

Also the image in the mirror is just full of a hodge podge of stuff.  Sorry but this is not working.

Oh well you can always try again.

Jun 11 14 04:31 pm Link

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Trair Newman

Posts: 14

Dubuque, Iowa, US

Thank you very much for the Honest feed back. What would u suggest i work on most?

Jun 16 14 11:01 am Link

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J Haggerty

Posts: 1315

Augusta, Georgia, US

Newmans Vision wrote:
Thank you very much for the Honest feed back. What would u suggest i work on most?

" As of now m goals are up in the air as to exactly what i want. " <- this is what you need to work on the most.

It looks like you're having fun, which is great, but to progress from this being fun to a hobby to an artistic career or commercial career you need to know what it is you want. What do you want to say? What do you want to show? What do you want to uncover, discover, etc? Figure this out first then get into the basics of photography: lighting, composition, color theory, concept building, etc.

Jun 16 14 01:26 pm Link

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