DaeNaturals wrote:
Fix the underwear.
Other than that, your lighting for the subject is pristine.
Well done.

Noted! Thank you very much for the feedback!

Brett Josephs Photo wrote:
Thanks for the feedback I really appreciate it! Yeah I know I actually kind of didn't mind the look but you are right. I will work harder on the next shoot;) lol we were pressed for time. Here is another shot. lol

Mike 3 by Joseph K Photography, on Flickr

With short hair works well to show just one ear, pose is also very static head and body facing same direction
Seems like he likes to raise his left eyebrow
Most of the poses are not using his arms; they are just at his sides. Use a dumbbell or some other prop to give them something to do

Wish you well

Lee_Photography wrote:

With short hair works well to show just one ear, pose is also very static head and body facing same direction
Seems like he likes to raise his left eyebrow
Most of the poses are not using his arms; they are just at his sides. Use a dumbbell or some other prop to give them something to do

Wish you well

Yeah we were supposed to shoot in the gym but couldn't last minute unfortunately.

Thank you for the feedback.

Brett Josephs Photo wrote:
This is my first photo post on MM;) Had the chance to shoot a very focused amateur bodybuilder last week. These are a few shots from the set. Let me know what you think.

Please feel free to check out my port and give feedback;)

Thanks Joey.

Mike collage by Joseph K Photography, on Flickr

very crisp. that's a good thing.

however the skin tone on his chest seems a bit off...

Giuseppe Luzio wrote:

very crisp. that's a good thing.



however the skin tone on his chest seems a bit off...

Yes I noticed the inconsistency in the skin tone in the chest areas from shot to shot since he had moved to close in some images and too far in others from the the key light. I am thinking of adding a softbox lower camera right or left for next shoot in addition;)

Thank you very much for the feedback!

Alabaster Crowley wrote:
The first and third one are really good. The lighting really shows off your body. You need a good head shot though. The middle one looks like you're making a "wtf?" face.

I agree that #1 and #3 are very good.