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Hello, i have recently updated my port. with all new photos! i need help in deciding which to put as my avatar and any constructive criticism is welcome! Also let me know if you would like a critique back Jun 16 14 01:27 pm Link I would say the first image would make a good avatar. As far as critique - well you have a nice look and a great figure, flaunt it if you got it! Work on your expressions, you seem to wear the same facial expression in all of your shots which makes you look new. Try not to use too many images in the same outfit. Fix that; practice some more poses and you should be ok. Best of luck! Jun 16 14 01:35 pm Link Beautiful figure. All I can say. Jun 16 14 04:17 pm Link Marin Photography NYC wrote: thank you!!!!!! Jun 17 14 11:18 am Link First of all, you are stunning. Your body is impeccable. Face is very nice. The photos are great. I can say that I think the only thing that could make you more beautiful would be a more flattering hair color. The honey is pretty but I think you can find something with a wow factor. Jun 17 14 07:27 pm Link expression. you've got the physique but youre not connecting emotionally. Jun 18 14 05:26 am Link jesse paulk wrote: thank you, i will work on that Jul 25 14 10:25 am Link LaDonna Jeanny wrote: i am currently undecided about hair Jul 25 14 10:25 am Link Besides the expression, I'd say maybe try some stuff where you're not looking right into the camera. Try a few where you let your eyes follow where your nose is pointing. Not sure if you have stuff like that in your files that you're just not showing on your port, but I think it would help. Jul 25 14 10:40 am Link Hi, I like the image I just commented on as your avatar. I don't like multiple images in 1 pic for models - 1 takes away from 2 - IMO. Your are beautiful. Good luck. And what you think of mine would be nice to hear. Jul 25 14 10:43 am Link Very nice images. You have a stunning figure and are very photogenic. I think you'll go far  I would have to go with the current consensus in saying work on varying your facial expressions. You are what I call a "one look pony" All expressions seem to be a variation of the same thing. I would also agree that the first image in your port would do well as an avatar, but it also hides your figure and poses for anyone browsing. Nice profile verbage as well. Short, simple, and to the point, and provides insight to what you are interested in shooting. Overall, Great work! looking forward to seeing more. Jul 25 14 11:25 am Link kschruder wrote: ^^^this too! Jul 25 14 11:26 am Link I think of all the shot that one you chose is the best for an avatar. Jul 25 14 12:15 pm Link Beautiful...and good choice on the avatar. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36224231 This isn't a "bad" shot, it's just not as good as the same one in the row before, and you have better portrait shots above it too, so it doesn't really "add" anything to your portfolio, in my opinion. But that's all I can say, great work. Jul 25 14 03:50 pm Link |
but thank you
