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Model

Joshua Williams

Posts: 40

Birmingham, England, United Kingdom

I'm looking to reduce my Model Mayhem portfolio to the best images I have so far. If anyone can aid me on which photos I should remove and why I would really appreciate it. Anything from 1-5 photos would be brilliant. Cheers!

Jun 16 14 06:32 pm Link

Photographer

PopCultPinups

Posts: 136

San Antonio, Texas, US

I'm thinking the top two right photos can go. I think they're alright photos, but they hide your face and don't do anything extra to show your versatility as a model.

Also, for future shoots, work on different facial expressions. You have a lot of the same look in most of the photos.

Jun 17 14 12:55 pm Link

Model

Joshua Williams

Posts: 40

Birmingham, England, United Kingdom

Jun 24 14 03:37 pm Link