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Model

Faune Addams

Posts: 42

Vancouver, Washington, US

I am working with a limited space as a free member, and am in the process of paring down my portfolio to only my strongest images. Serious and respectful answers only, please. Tell me which images you feel are the strongest, and which you think I should trash. Reasons as to why are also greatly appreciated as I am learning what indicates a particularly good shot from the standpoint of the model. For those of you whom shoot nude work, feel free to critique my nude portfolio as well: https://www.modelmayhem.com/3191335

Jun 17 14 01:02 pm Link

Photographer

Fototid

Posts: 38

Lund, Skåne, Sweden

The images in order from my favourite to my least favourite
Very nice feel to it. You look relaxed in the somewhat unnatural pose.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131124/19/5292c6eea8f3e_m.jpg

Not bad. But in my mind a bit to head on to show off your figure.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131124/19/5292c6ce345e9_m.jpg

Has a pleasant feel to it shows you have multiple expressions to offer.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140530/19/53894328e2b32_m.jpg

Again shows diversity in style and has a nice feel to is. Shows that even non-ideal angles of you can come out good.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140530/19/538942d2411b9_m.jpg

Another nice style. Shows of your face well.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131124/19/5292c5807fa4b_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140617/12/53a094fc955ce_m.jpg

This is your only full figure shot. Your are missing one of those that show of your figure properly.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140530/19/538943c0adcb2_m.jpg

I like it even if your right leg is twisted awkwardly.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140530/19/538941a8ef4df_m.jpg

I can't decide if this one shows to much and focuses on the bra instead of the face or if it shows to little and not focus on your figure.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131124/19/5292c63152cb8_m.jpg

All my focus goes to your overexposed neck and the seams of your dress. It doesn't capture me
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140617/12/53a094a82cbb9_m.jpg


Will be interesting to see others priorities.

Jun 17 14 01:51 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

For me, I like your nude work better. you do a great job in portraying a mood. Wish you lived closer......

Jun 17 14 02:21 pm Link

Photographer

Erik Manwaring

Posts: 665

Ruskin, Florida, US

Peach Jones wrote:
For me, I like your nude work better. you do a great job in portraying a mood. Wish you lived closer......

I have to agree with this.



At the same time I do like this.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131124/19/5292c6eea8f3e.jpg

Jun 17 14 02:37 pm Link