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Model

Amy Rebecca

Posts: 17

Orlando, Florida, US

I have a handful of photos in my port, I'm brand new here at model mayhem. I would appreciate some feedback on my portfolio and what type of modeling I should pursue and why would it work for me. I also would like to know the ugly too.

Jun 18 14 10:12 pm Link

Photographer

ljk photo

Posts: 11

Dunedin, Otago, New Zealand

Pretty good work for a beginner.
I would remove this shot:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131224/23/52ba84c3dda37_m.jpg

I feel like it brings down your port. Otherwise, keep it up!

Jun 19 14 01:24 pm Link

Photographer

DVP Photography

Posts: 2874

Broomfield, Colorado, US

Your stats, figure and look are best suited for glamour, and fitness.

Just keep developing your port and practice, practice!

Jun 24 14 09:02 pm Link

Photographer

Howard Tarragon

Posts: 673

New York, New York, US

Love the shot - too bad we don't know who it is:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140617/15/53a0bd0bda9e2_m.jpg

Nice pose - not the best shot - your face is blurry and the skin on your legs looks blotchy
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140527/19/53854583d2ea5_m.jpg

A keeper - shows you clearly.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140430/20/5361bd4e9b1d2_m.jpg

Use the left one
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140425/13/535ac94174c7a_m.jpg

You can keep it until a better one comes along - your face and figure are blocked here
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140108/13/52cdc9187553e_m.jpg

More like hypnotized
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131224/23/52ba84c3dda37_m.jpg

Beautiful
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131222/20/52b7bb36152bc_m.jpg

Blurring out the background would do a lot for this image. The jacket makes your torso look very small - watch the effects of wardrobe.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131218/19/52b269a41bcff_m.jpg

You have beautiful eyes, but you need an expression
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131218/19/52b26969b269e_m.jpg

Million watt smile, lovely figure -blurry!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131218/19/52b26872db0b2_m.jpg

Same
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131218/19/52b2681c17402_m.jpg

You've got a great shape, a lovely face and a million dollar smile. You need better photographers and to practice putting emotion in your face. The last two are amazing.
Do lots more shoots!

Jul 04 14 10:40 am Link

Photographer

KM2 Creative

Posts: 164

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

I would get rid of:

Blurry shot. Takes away from your port.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131218/19/52b26872db0b2_m.jpg

Looks a bit like a selfie.  There's nothing interesting about the light.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131224/23/52ba84c3dda37_m.jpg

Jul 04 14 12:01 pm Link