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Model

Slawee

Posts: 15

Dubai, Dubai, United Arab Emirates

Hi ... i just uploaded some pics. Can you please tell me what do you think about them?

S. smile

Jun 19 14 10:29 pm Link

Photographer

Mark

Posts: 2977

New York, New York, US

sorry they all are pretty odd looking.try a new test smiling and not fashion or art

Jun 25 14 09:55 pm Link

Model

Slawee

Posts: 15

Dubai, Dubai, United Arab Emirates

Lack of smile? big_smile

Jun 26 14 01:45 am Link

Model

Slawee

Posts: 15

Dubai, Dubai, United Arab Emirates

Some other critiques, pelase? smile

Jul 12 14 02:31 am Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140427/11/535d4a413aadb_m.jpg
With that much head tilt, one might think you have a broken neck
A little tilt goes a long way

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140427/11/535d4a181dcbb_m.jpg
Of your portfolio offering, this for me is your strongest

Like to see you add full length standing

Wish you well

Jul 12 14 09:36 am Link

Photographer

Santiago Alvarez

Posts: 91

Fort Lauderdale, Florida, US

Mouth looks stiff, eyes look dead. There's no sort of emotion.
I would advice you try to impart some type of emotion with your face, use every inch of it. Practice really does help. If you go for something, attack it. Don't just stand there and try to look like a model.
Wish you luck.

Jul 12 14 09:45 am Link