I would love to know what you guys think of the new work I'm coming out with, and how you think it compares to the old stuff at the bottom of my port!

thanks

They are okay, but I'm not sure if the new ones are that much better.


The only one I think does not look good is:




I think this is your strongest pose and best image:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36330363 blurry, the angle of the shot makes you look short too...

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36292129 cute but not for a portfolio.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35996710 over blown highlights.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36330376 would be better if it was edited. Dark shadow under the eyes, skin blemishes show a bit much.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36330372 a bit slouchy, sloppy.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33968237 No, it looks amateur.

The other images are ok in my view.

You have a good look and the stats, the issue is more so who you shoot with rather than you alone.

For you:

Be more expressive, awkward poses work for fashion but you got to be more convincing with attitude! Expression! Mood! 

Bio - too wordy.  Keep it simple. I don't do any nudity.  Leave out the porn and fetish comments, leave out the friend request info too.  Unnecessary information.

Best of luck!

You are an incredibly cute girl and I feel like you could do very well in the lifestyle genre. Images like number 11 are your strength IMO. I would do more of that.

Not a fan of this image
Dress at tummy is much brighter then your face
Wall is not working for me [Move further away]


This is so close
Raise chin slightly
Thread bottom of top where it is buttoned
Clothing is gathered under models right arm [bunching up]
Hair just looks messy
White logo on dark background distracting
Move models left elbow back


Eyes need to be in sharp focus
Some kind of threads above models left breast area
Undergarment telegraphing through dress in chest area
Bra showing in open dress area
Logo distracting
Is that a zit on your chin that could be Photoshoped out?


Missing part of models right hand
Model is pointing left hand and arm at camera giving them a shorter appearance
Arch back raise chin


Move away from the wall
Model is too square to camera, place hips on angle
Just hook the tips of your thumbs on pocket rather then putting finger tips in pockets


Of your images this is your strongest

You have an astounding look; I would expect you to produce some fantastic images

Wish you well

the new stuff is weaker.
The older shots have a slightly better finish to them, where styling, composition was more supportive of your look.
Overall, get better shots.