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Chloe Selene

Posts: 636

Albuquerque, New Mexico, US

Thanks! Noted and appreciated. smile

Jul 15 14 05:17 pm Link

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Azlyn

Posts: 35

Spartanburg, South Carolina, US

Steven Lemmens wrote:

Ok, You still want to learn a bit! :-) Throw yourself more in the pictures. Whatever sort of shoot you're doing, always imagine the following: what could I do, to make people stop to have a better look at this picture. Get yourself inspired by other poses/glances. Exercisi; not always in front of the mirror, sometimes you need to feel a glance and its correlation with the correct emotion!

A lot of your pictures are still "passing by without noticing". This also has to do with the photographers you work with. I'd level up on those as well.

I'd certainly delete these three, all because of the same reason: they're just too snapshot:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 3#36277510

and
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35945939

and
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36050755

Thank you for the advice and for taking the time to give me thorough and honest feedback. Noted and very much appreciated.  smile

Jul 16 14 09:41 am Link