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Model

Phane

Posts: 2063

Rockville, Maryland, US

Would love some feedback Thank you!

Jul 08 14 03:25 pm Link

Photographer

-Ansel-

Posts: 13

Saint Louis, Missouri, US

You appear to have a wonderfully curvy body... however when laid across this chair:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36388385
it's compressing your body in all the wrong ways making you appear more thick than you are.. I'd rather see your face in profile or if you need to be anonymous then lose the ear and the shot needs to be more perpendicular to you the subject.. light is kind of off too.. Critiquing you it tough without giving the camera operator a bit of grief too wink

Similarly on this one:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36388382
Your bottom is too compressed. If you do this again.. my preference would be to wear heels and lift your bottom just above the chair just before the click of the shutter to let your marvelously round parts stay round.. your upper body here is also 'at rest'. At the same time you're lifting off the chair I'd like to see the upper body extend and maybe one elbow above the other just a touch to add a bit of angularity.

Your images with Magicc & Liquid Light are beautifully done! Never given critique here on MM hope that's what you were looking for......

Jul 13 14 07:15 am Link

Model

Phane

Posts: 2063

Rockville, Maryland, US

That was very helpful

Thank you!

Jul 14 14 05:50 pm Link