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Model

grewalg2

Posts: 16

Saratoga Springs, New York, US

Hello Everyone,

I managed to complete a day's worth of modeling with a great photographer, Richard Wayra, and I would really appreciate some feeback on the portfolio.

Sincerely,

- Jay Singh

Jul 14 14 08:09 pm Link

Model

Sandra Vixen

Posts: 1561

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

This has some potential, but it really needs editing in post, more contrast and color:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140721/21/53cde7f12eb88_m.jpg

I like this one the best, but I think you should stand up taller, 6' is not high enough. smile
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140714/19/53c498a7b2172_m.jpg

The other pics are okay, you have good poses, but I don't find the camera work to be all that
great.

This one looks like a vacation photo and not a modelling photo:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140415/23/534e2778f3346_m.jpg

Also grooming, what felt off was that you have little chest hair but hair everywhere else, like if you used a body double. I would like to say; clean face and arm shaved, but that is my preference. smile

Edit: Sorry, my bad spell checker. :p

Jul 24 14 09:43 pm Link