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foubellefemme

Posts: 65

Sierra Vista, Arizona, US

Please remember I realize I could only possibly be considered as a lifestyle model as this is a hobby.  I have been working on my port pics (which isn't the question here anyway). Thanks !

Jul 17 14 08:48 pm Link

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Philip R

Posts: 698

Agoura Hills, California, US

I think it is fine for a start.  Since it is very "just starting up" specific, you should update it regularly after you have a shoot or two.

Have fun modelling!

Jul 17 14 09:02 pm Link

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Mark Salo

Posts: 11726

Olney, Maryland, US

Philip R wrote:
I think it is fine for a start.  Since it is very "just starting up" specific, you should update it regularly after you have a shoot or two.

Have fun modelling!

+1

I've seen profiles where members say things that are time specific (for example: I'm pregnant, or travel plans) and do not list a month and year.  I tend to assume that these items are out of date.

Thank you for your service.

Jul 18 14 05:48 pm Link

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Pictures of Life

Posts: 792

Spokane, Washington, US

The first paragraph is not relevant to this site. It's pretty much what I see in poorly written personal ads, and this isn't a dating site. Suggest that you keep it on subject.

Jul 19 14 07:13 pm Link

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Lakeshore Photography

Posts: 184

Holland, Michigan, US

I think it's fine smile It gives people a brief description of yourself, lets people know what your background is and what you're looking to accomplish going forward.

Best wishes to you going forward!

Jul 19 14 07:18 pm Link

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