Please Check out my Port. I would love to hear feedback!!! Thanks!! Jul 17 14 09:23 pm Link You have some good shots, but a little too many duplicates/similars. Be careful not to lower or drop your head (hunch forward), for example: It makes you look weak and depressed, as if you were about to pass out, same problem again: No not again: This is a good one but look over your shoulder, don't bring the shoulder up: I like this one: But it needs a background, because it's a tribal look, and the colors need to be enhanced in post. Always look towards the light, not away from it: Good, this is towards the light: This is a good frame, but it does look as if you were about to stagger a bit: Look towards the light and keep your head up and proud. Jul 24 14 09:32 pm Link You have some really good stuff. Nice job. This is my favorite Your right arm is just dangling at your side. It looks like a tear, so maybe keep it, but I am not especially fond of it. Left arm is dangling, and hand is flat to camera. Just bend your elbow a little and turn your hand. See the nice separation you get between your arms and body. Nice pose, but your expression looks anxious. Great natural smile. Dump, blurry. Short lighting is what you want. The light is on your left, but you are looking right. Make sure you are facing the light. Nice profile, but the background is distracting. Nice shot. This should be your avatar. In a lot of the shots you are square to the camera. Try to turn at an angle to the camera. Make sure you turn toward the main light source. Lower the leading shoulder. Create separation between the body and arms. Aug 10 14 12:29 pm Link |