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Model

Monique S C

Posts: 70

Mesa, Arizona, US

I would like your advice......I have shoots planned for next month.....so I need to go on another deleting spree soon. wink

Jul 31 14 05:17 pm Link

Model

Anna Vanston

Posts: 43

Los Angeles, California, US

SPRINGHEEL  wrote:

BEST

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130511/15/518ecae852c5e_m.jpg

Nice lighting, nice color.  Everything is framed well.  You look great.  Shows off your fantastic shape and comes with a bit of attitude.  I like a few other shots almost as much but this one sells you the best


WORST

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130919/20/523bc1b4d30eb_m.jpg

I don't know what this is or why its happening.  The make-up looks like you were slapped in the face with Cheetos.  I don't like the costume, especially that jacket.  You look like you were waiting at a Holiday Inn pool for a second rate fashion shoot to start when someone asked you if they could take your picture and, while they were taking the picture, someone else took this blandly done snapshot.  Ditch this one and consider dropping the playground one as well.  The only thing thats working in that one is your face.


Hope that helps

Haha yes, thank you. The 'worst' one was the only one where I didn't have any say on wardrobe or hair and makeup. I'll ditch it before too long! I appreciate your time and consideration!

Aug 01 14 01:28 pm Link

Photographer

TheZombieJose

Posts: 106

Los Angeles, California, US

please please smile

Aug 01 14 01:46 pm Link

Photographer

SPRINGHEEL

Posts: 38224

Detroit, Michigan, US

Monique S C wrote:
I would like your advice......I have shoots planned for next month.....so I need to go on another deleting spree soon. wink

BEST

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140717/13/53c8315a0e3de_m.jpg


WORST

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140717/13/53c830a524e80_m.jpg

Aug 04 14 01:03 pm Link

Photographer

SPRINGHEEL

Posts: 38224

Detroit, Michigan, US

Anna Vanston wrote:

Haha yes, thank you. The 'worst' one was the only one where I didn't have any say on wardrobe or hair and makeup. I'll ditch it before too long! I appreciate your time and consideration!

You're very welcome, Anna

Aug 04 14 01:03 pm Link

Photographer

SPRINGHEEL

Posts: 38224

Detroit, Michigan, US

JoseM Photography wrote:
please please smile

BEST

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30458756


WORST

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120626/23/4feaa2eaabad9_m.jpg

Aug 04 14 01:05 pm Link

Photographer

SPRINGHEEL

Posts: 38224

Detroit, Michigan, US

Thats it, I'm done


Thanks for playing everyone

Aug 04 14 01:05 pm Link

Model

Torttunaattori

Posts: 320

Helsinki, Uusimaa, Finland

Tell me big_smile

please and thank you <3

Aug 06 14 11:56 pm Link

Model

Kandy Vert

Posts: 40

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

I'd like to play too! Thanks in advance wink

Aug 08 14 02:52 pm Link