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Photographer

Natif Natal Photography

Posts: 5

Miami, Florida, US

I really love doing photography and i have alot of pictures I havent uploaded adn want to see what your thoughts on the ones I have up are. I am going to reorganize at some point but would love to hear thoughts on my port now.

I have thick skin so attack away.

Jul 30 14 12:39 pm Link

Model

Sandra Vixen

Posts: 1561

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

You certainly have a great variety and I really don't see any major problems that stand out.

The only subtle thing that I notice among most of your frames is that the models do not appear to know what they are doing (not experienced). A few are, but the others do not seems so (or it was a bad frame) but either way, your work seems to be better than most of your models.

The one thing that I don't see in your port is a good action frame, one that shows how well you can shoot a fast subject at high ISO.

I think this frame needs to go:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140719/01/53ca30c43fe3c_m.jpg
It's lighting and color is just not good and you have so many better ones.

The lighting on this is not good and the pose is awkward:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140606/23/5392ad5c79603_m.jpg

This is one of your best, the model has experience and demonstrates proper training:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140606/22/5392a89f058b3_m.jpg

Jul 31 14 01:52 am Link

Photographer

Natif Natal Photography

Posts: 5

Miami, Florida, US

Thank you Sandra.

I appreciate the critique. it is very valuable.

Sandra Vixen wrote:
You certainly have a great variety and I really don't see any major problems that stand out.

The only subtle thing that I notice among most of your frames is that the models do not appear to know what they are doing (not experienced). A few are, but the others do not seems so (or it was a bad frame) but either way, your work seems to be better than most of your models.

The one thing that I don't see in your port is a good action frame, one that shows how well you can shoot a fast subject at high ISO.

I think this frame needs to go:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140719/01/53ca30c43fe3c_m.jpg
It's lighting and color is just not good and you have so many better ones.

The lighting on this is not good and the pose is awkward:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140606/23/5392ad5c79603_m.jpg

This is one of your best, the model has experience and demonstrates proper training:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140606/22/5392a89f058b3_m.jpg

Jul 31 14 10:59 am Link