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Model

Dwayne D

Posts: 14

New York, New York, US

Hey guys I'm a new model and could use some constructive criticism on my port. Play nice smile

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/3422397/viewall

Aug 05 14 08:08 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140805/19/53e1929f3e113_m.jpg

Unless your photos are this good or better just say no

Aug 05 14 08:20 pm Link

Photographer

PhotoLoveXO

Posts: 95

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

I agree with lee.  I don't think any of the other photos really add much to the portfolio.

Aug 05 14 08:54 pm Link

Photographer

J Haggerty

Posts: 1315

Augusta, Georgia, US

I like the bunny photos. If conceptual and art is your thing keep them, if you're wanting to do fashion, editorial, catalog or other mainstream styles then you'll want to nix them.

Aug 06 14 12:20 pm Link

Photographer

Paul Tirado Photography

Posts: 4363

New York, New York, US

I like your port. Shows variety in concepts and expression. Like the rabbit shots, shows that if someone wanted to do a weird or avant guarde concept that you would be game.

Aug 06 14 07:29 pm Link

Model

MissKatieMarie

Posts: 135

Sarasota, Florida, US

I like it. Good expression, good variety. It shows you can do both the sort of catalog fashion type of shots and avant garde. It's important to have versatility in your modeling. If you ever upgrade to where you can make different albums, I would just have one for commercial fashion and another for the more avant garde fashion- just to keep it organized. Granted, if you ever want to go a more specific route like commercial fashion then you would probably want to get rid of the avant garde photos or if you want to go high fashion/avant garde then I would get rid of the commercial fashion type photos. It all depends on what you want to do. You have great variety and expression so you could really go for whatever you want.

Aug 06 14 08:26 pm Link

Photographer

WisconsinArt

Posts: 612

Nashotah, Wisconsin, US

I like the expressions but sometimes a good model gets stuck with photographers who lack vision.

I think magic will happen once you hook up with an exceptional photographer.

Aug 06 14 09:09 pm Link