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Model

Katzen Lynx

Posts: 327

Belmont, New Hampshire, US

Simply....What should go, what should stay?

Aug 08 14 06:30 am Link

Photographer

Motordrive Photography

Posts: 7087

Lodi, California, US

You've put together a pretty wide ranging port, from art to glamour. There are
some that could be considered good, but I don't think they do much for you.

+18
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35061192
it's literally anonymous to me, and with out separation of darks to b.g.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33937076
this one is for a photographer, or retoucher

your avi is okay, but some parts don't seem sharp to me 

love the bathtub and couch ones
just one worthless opinion

Aug 08 14 01:52 pm Link

Model

Katzen Lynx

Posts: 327

Belmont, New Hampshire, US

Thank you for the opinions, the second photo I retouched myself. I do agree with the first image you mentioned. Thank you again for your in put

Aug 08 14 02:02 pm Link

Photographer

L O C U T U S

Posts: 1746

Bangor, Maine, US

Motordrive Photography wrote:
You've put together a pretty wide ranging port, from art to glamour. There are
some that could be considered good, but I don't think they do much for you.

+18
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35061192
it's literally anonymous to me, and with out separation of darks to b.g.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33937076
this one is for a photographer, or retoucher

your avi is okay, but some parts don't seem sharp to me 

love the bathtub and couch ones
just one worthless opinion

+1

Aug 08 14 07:21 pm Link