I'm still pretty new in this whole thing (I've been doing it for a little over 2 months) and recently I've added a few more images and I'd just like a little update on how I'm doing. I know on my older ones it lacks facial expression and I'm also aware of my height being way below industry standard, trust me. Anything else I should look out for, what I should add to my portfolio, ways to elongate myself to look taller, what works for me, what doesn't...anything along those lines would be greatly appreciated.
Thank you!!

only critique....keep expanding....beautiful emote, now show your figure, some smiles and candid, Mo

Left you a few comments. Very nice portfolio for just starting out. Feel free to message me if you want more tips or ideas. Im always willing to help new models.  Bob

Thank you both!

85 pounds? Eat some cheeseburgers!

Seriously, you're off to a good start. I would think about maybe more range of emotion and body language. You got bedroom eyes mastered, what else?

OP: In looking through your work, you have a start. I would suggest to expand facial expressions next. Also, maybe work with a few photographers that can get you into different sets with hair and makeup so you do not have the same exact look for each image. Look at poses in magazines and online from your idols, and try to replicate them in the mirror until you have them down also. The more that you shoot also, the better that you will get, and the more that you will learn.

Good luck!