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Model

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Just uploaded some new photos.

Critiques appreciated. Let me know what you think.

ANY GOOD???

WILL ONLY KEEP 4 OR 5.

Or maybe only 2 smile

or 1

xxx

Aug 19 14 03:25 am Link

Photographer

Clippix

Posts: 58

Luton, England, United Kingdom

Nice, the only thing that i've noticed and it isn't a huge deal is your hands. In most of the photos they're made into a fist, just straighten themsoften them up a little.

Aug 19 14 03:38 am Link

Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Have been told that before... smile

Thanks. It will sink in someday smile

Aug 19 14 06:08 am Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Wow you really did change everything out.

My only suggestion would be to keep only one photo from each look

Keepers

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140819/06/53f34b13acd31_m.jpg

[Next time point models left toes away from camera, when pointed at camera they tend to look shorter, minor thing.]

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140819/02/53f31db374866_m.jpg

Like the color version over black and white

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140819/02/53f318ca91580_m.jpg

You already heard about the long beautiful fingers, this for me is the best of this set

Keep going you are doing great

Aug 19 14 08:37 am Link

Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Thank you so much smile

You are just the best ...always !!!

ELENA

Aug 19 14 12:21 pm Link

Photographer

Garry k

Posts: 30129

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Lee_Photography wrote:
Wow you really did change everything out.

My only suggestion would be to keep only one photo from each look

Keepers

[Next time point models left toes away from camera, when pointed at camera they tend to look shorter, minor thing.]

Like the color version over black and white

You already heard about the long beautiful fingers, this for me is the best of this set

Keep going you are doing great

Agreed and I am sad to see that you have deleted many of your more classic shots

Aug 19 14 02:47 pm Link

Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Garry k wrote:

Agreed and I am sad to see that you have deleted many of your more classic shots

Aug 19 14 11:49 pm Link

Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Elena Antonia Pappas wrote:

I haven't deleted them at all smile Just hidden for a day or two smile I am going to add 1 or 2 new ones to my portfolio. I just uploaded these to ask for some help choosing smile

Aug 19 14 11:56 pm Link

Photographer

sospix

Posts: 23775

Orlando, Florida, US

This one was the eye catcher for me . . .

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140819/02/53f31c86b5fc6.jpg

. . . the pose and the eye connection really clicked . . .

SOS

Aug 20 14 07:50 am Link

Photographer

Ron McKinney

Posts: 458

Chicago, Illinois, US

I agree with the three that Lee Photography pointed out as your best. In this new set, I don't know why you're so close to the wall with such harsh lighting from one source. The shadow on the wall doesn't make the image more intriguing. Your dark hair blends into the shadow and in essence makes your head just look bigger. So I'm not a fan of this style, but I've loved your earlier work.

Please come to Chicago.

Aug 20 14 08:51 am Link

Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

sospix wrote:
This one was the eye catcher for me . . .

. . . the pose and the eye connection really clicked . . .

SOS

Thanks so much for your critique. I like this one smile I am coming to Florida in December. We leave South Africa December 8th. Will be in Vero Beach and Miami for one month. Pity:( Would have loved to do the shoot..re your casting call... beach girls..I dont surf sad

Aug 20 14 09:43 am Link

Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Ron McKinney wrote:
I agree with the three that Lee Photography pointed out as your best. In this new set, I don't know why you're so close to the wall with such harsh lighting from one source. The shadow on the wall doesn't make the image more intriguing. Your dark hair blends into the shadow and in essence makes your head just look bigger. So I'm not a fan of this style, but I've loved your earlier work.

Please come to Chicago.

Believe me I would love to come to Chicago smile Thank goodness I am going to do another shoot with Anthony Neste when I'm there ( Florida ) in December.
Thanks again for your critique smile

Aug 20 14 09:50 am Link