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Model

Diane Diane Diane

Posts: 23

Monterrey, Nuevo León, Mexico

Hello everyone! I really wish to read what you think about my work, I'ld be glad if you take a look at my port and give me your reviews bellow or in the pictures (:
thanks for your time! I appreciate honest and direct critic, as well as advices

Diane-

Aug 20 14 06:33 pm Link

Photographer

Laurence Moan

Posts: 7844

Huntington Beach, California, US

I like your work.

My only advice is that you should contact me when you come to L.A.

cool

Aug 20 14 06:47 pm Link

Model

Diane Diane Diane

Posts: 23

Monterrey, Nuevo León, Mexico

totally updated everything!

Aug 20 14 11:18 pm Link

Photographer

Sans Cloth

Posts: 166

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

I really love you look and would shoot with you any day, except you don't do nudes sad

I really, really like the top b&w image here:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140820/22/53f5845ccdc82_m.jpg

Aug 21 14 03:57 pm Link

Model

Diane Diane Diane

Posts: 23

Monterrey, Nuevo León, Mexico

I appreciate it (: thanks!

Aug 21 14 05:07 pm Link

Photographer

WisconsinArt

Posts: 612

Nashotah, Wisconsin, US

What's there is great but I want more. The serious face and bedroom eyes doesn't set you above the usual. Expand on body language and facial expressions. Can you be light? Can you be dark? Can you tell a story?

Aug 21 14 05:27 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

As a model you have a great look, just in some of your photos you are not showcased as well as you can be. My preference is one photo per slot

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140820/23/53f58bd60e720_m.jpg
Top photo picks from this set would be top and bottom photo as far as your modeling and look, but the busy backgrounds are really distracting, arch back in top photo

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140820/22/53f5887900e52_m.jpg
First photo models is too square to camera
Second photo model is blasting camera with white of eye
Third photo nice pose shows your shape well
Last photo great pose, just wish white of eye was not blasting camera
[The plastic pieces are not working for me at all]

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140820/20/53f5615099e0c_m.jpg
I like the bottom photo of this set

[Just a guide for selecting photos for your portfolio, is if you show the elbow include the hand, if you show the knee include the foot]

Aug 22 14 05:13 am Link

Photographer

kschruder

Posts: 85

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Overall I really like your work, very different than what you usually see on MM. You've worked with some good photographers too, which shows you know your stuff!

Aug 22 14 07:01 am Link

Photographer

Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 3716

San Cristóbal de las Casas, Chiapas, Mexico

Very nice. smile

Aug 22 14 07:46 am Link

Retoucher

retouch1234

Posts: 14

Los Angeles, California, US

Nice portfolio,

I would suggest continue to push yourself outside your comfort zone and extremes. The more raw emotion you can evoke, you more you will uncover as a model artist.

Hope that helps!

Aug 22 14 07:47 am Link