Hello friends!

I'm an amateur working hard to improve and I would love it if you would consider taking a look at my portfolio and telling me what you think! Overall impressions and pointers on specific images if you have any! Thank you!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/3328488/viewall

Chin too high so camera is looking up your nose


Too much head tilt
Place hips on angle to camera for thinning effect and more dynamics




From a modeling point of view I really like your look in these photos
[Note: Photography, lighting and photo processing not counted in opinion]

Great look wish you well

<img src='http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140508/05/536b7ea3a6955.jpg' />
is my favorite in your port.In this shot I can see what a natural beauty you are! The previous poster has made some great observations. If you are interested in a relatively new photog's opinion, consider these points:
-Colour! most people look great in black, and it gives a dynamic feel, but what I'm concluding from your port is, you shoot only in black and whites, or you are going for a goth thing and don't do colour.
-Backgrounds, vary them! otherwise you shots will look all the same, esp.if you wear similar wardrobe in all of them.
-Show me you can do expressions and poses. Otherwise I'm likely to think you are looking only to shoot serious and standing poses.

Hope to see more of your work in the future, you are quite attractive, let's see what you can do with those good looks!