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First off I'm not stating in anyway I'm a professional or a professional critique giver, these are my opinions and my opinions alone. FIRST IMPRESSION -I will visit your page and give you honest, genuine, and hopefully helpful feedback on how to better your MM profile/portfolio. IN RETURN -I'd like either the same back, or any type of feedback returned, whether that is a comment, list, friend request, message, etc. ***you give and you shall receive*** Simple enough? Let's chat. Sep 05 14 05:34 am Link I'm in. Unfortunately I don't keep my work on Model Mayhem. But there is a link to my tumblr that you can click on to see more of my work. Cheers. Sep 05 14 06:34 am Link Jason B Forbes wrote: Hi Jason! Sep 05 14 06:39 am Link Sep 05 14 07:00 am Link John Kish wrote: Thanks for taking time and checking out my work. i appreciate it. I can assure you i'm real lol. All of the girls on my site came from model mayhem. I just like to exhibit my work in a certain way, so i chose not to put the photos on here. Thanks once again though buddy. Sep 05 14 07:01 am Link I like your profile statement, and your photos show that you have a great look for modelling, so I expect you will do well. While this isn't the strongest shot in your portfolio, it will definitely get attention:  This is by far the best shot, and it's a great headshot:  I'd simply love to hear your impressions of a model old enough to be your mother, who has been modelling since before you were born.......... Sep 05 14 07:21 am Link MatureModelMM Hi there Wow first off thanks for the words and critique, much appreciated! Now to you! I love how confident you are right off the bat. I wasn't sure how I'd feel about you based on your avatar, it doesn't seem to "jump" out at me as someone I want to click, (BUT when I looked at the photo up close it is beautiful  ) Your profile is a little lengthy and I felt like I didn't want to read it. This day and age especially as I'm sure you know, everyone wants a quick read, in/out, a quick sense of who you are. I did like the goals or shoots you want done, gives photographers a solid foundation as to who they're working with and also what you might like to do. Portfolio wise I love your garden shed series, natural and beautiful. Your nude interest comes off as very natural and is complimented well by the nature in that series. I wasn't blown away by your portfolio, mostly because I know you can do better  You have personality and guts and you now just need the right photographers to give you a chance and produce some great shots for your portfolio. Keep goin! Thanks!! Xo Sep 05 14 07:40 am Link I like your profile, not too wordy but let's us know who you are. Your port is great, so many different looks and expressions. That's something I'm trying to add to my work because most of my port is the same right now, especially in expression. Let me know what you think! Sep 05 14 10:04 am Link Hey Randy  Thanks for the feedback! As for you! I Like your "about you" section, nice and simple-can tell you're determined, but this is a modeling website and acting gigs don't come much from modeling. It does help you focus on your image however which can in turn help your acting career I personally would be gung hoe about modeling on your profile so people want to work with you. Your port is interesting, you have your weakest images all first, so I don't even want to look at your port, but I scrolled down and saw that you have a great handful of professional looking images! Swap those around!!! Just keep shooting to get some better images, also try Backstage if you haven't already for acting gigs best of luck !Sep 05 14 12:01 pm Link Thanks for the feedback! I'll definitely move the pics around. I always just have the newest first but I like your idea better Sep 05 14 12:44 pm Link I think your biggest set back is working with mediocre photographers Looking through your portfolio I caught myself mostly critiquing the photographers job I would love to see you work with one who's more experienced than you ,pay for a shoot - do what you need to do! it will push you out of amateur mode! Sep 05 14 02:16 pm Link Hey, John -- My two cents -- take or leave as you please... Your profile is great -- says a lot of good things about you, but more importantly it communicates that you're not a diva. In your port, I would say my overall favorite is this one and should be your avatar:  Great connection with the camera, and your features are shown off very well. I do think the entire top row could go, as well as these:   Those two above feel more like snapshots than model shots. The one below does the job of showing off your physique as well as any of those above or the top row of your port, with the added bonus of being a more interesting shot (except that your hands are cut off).  I would also dump this one:  You have better headshots in your port, and the color tone on this one isn't off enough to feel vintage, just off enough to make you look a little unwell. But overall, great look -- I'd be very happy to shoot with you. Sep 05 14 02:19 pm Link Newb, so I would greatly appreciate feedback. Thanks! Sep 05 14 05:31 pm Link Rachel Reilly Just going to cut to the chase. Your work is professional as are you- or what I deem a professional Your about you section is simple because you don't have to talk, your work does it for you. Your portfolio is stunning. Your angles, range of looks, models, lighting, post processing- all flawless. You have superb photos and I would kill to work with you Thanks for your helpful words and for stopping by. Best of luck to you! xoSep 06 14 06:31 am Link ChesireDave Hi! Ok First impression: I was not impressed with your avatar. It does not grab my eye and the lighting looks less than mediocre. It's a beautiful shot up close, but looking at your great portfolio you have many options which are much better! You have great lighting and color, portrait styles, natural- commercial on some of them Your about section is great, models know what they're getting when they sign up with you, and I love that you're still willing to TF Good artist that is. I too would work with you Best of luck!Sep 06 14 06:40 am Link Arsanova hello! First off I like your avatar, it's nice! I would be interested in seeing the photo with less fade and more sharp contrast and B&W, but I get what you're going for. Anyway your bio is on the short side, I don't get a sense of who you are other than a graphic artist which is sweet! Your portfolio is a good start, you have some strong images, but you also have some weak not professional looking ones that bring your whole port down some notches. Start getting yourself out there with some awesome models and building your port. I'm sure you have plenty of amazing ideas for graphic design and photography. Keep going and best of luck hon! JK Sep 06 14 07:03 am Link John Kish wrote: Hello, Sep 06 14 08:57 am Link https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 79f9_m.jpg I agree, I think this is the best headshot and would make a great avatar. Friend request also sent! Sep 06 14 10:45 am Link John Kish wrote: Thank you Sep 06 14 04:58 pm Link Sure! I love these shots of yours:   Sep 06 14 06:16 pm Link Hi there! As previously stated I also think you have a great "About Me" short, sweet, and to the point. You come across as a super nice and laid-back person, but professional nonetheless. All good things haha. I do like how you have diversity in your port, though the profile photo I commented on is the one that I liked the most, as well as what caught my eye right off the bat. I definitely would prefer it for your profile picture simply because it stands out and draws the eye. Any thoughts on my port would be much appreciated, although I only have photos up from one shoot at the moment so diversity is definitely lacking! Thanks in advance Best, Moé Sep 06 14 08:19 pm Link Hey John, Just left some comments on a couple of your images. Great work! Sep 08 14 07:52 am Link Hi, I'd love your opinion on what needs to go from my port and what I need to improve on please Regarding feedback for yours - I love your look! Favourites: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26863633 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33819518 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33667796 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36768162 Least favourites (I'd get rid of, humble opinion): https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27061930 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36638249 Sep 08 14 12:14 pm Link I would very much appreciate this! Thank you. Sep 08 14 04:16 pm Link Just wanted to say thanks a lot! Much appreciated xx Sep 09 14 08:05 pm Link |
