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Model

Miss Kelsey Doll

Posts: 14

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Hey just starting to get into modeling more seriously but not sure if my profile is set up correctly? https://www.modelmayhem.com/MissKelseyDollAdelaide

thank you smile

Sep 09 14 11:25 pm Link

Model

Miss Kelsey Doll

Posts: 14

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Not sure if showing my diversity as a model is a good thing or just showing my own style?

Also have more images here if they are better shots smile

www.facebook.com/MissKelseyDoll

and if possible opinions on this shot please  smile


https://www.facebook.com/KayJanicePhoto … =1&theater

Sep 11 14 04:35 pm Link

Photographer

Nor-Cal Photography

Posts: 3720

Walnut Creek, California, US

Miss Kelsey Doll wrote:
if possible opinions on this shot please  smile

https://www.facebook.com/KayJanicePhoto … =1&theater

This is probably better than most images in your MM portfolio.

But just one worthless opinion.   smile

Sep 12 14 03:41 pm Link

Model

Miss Kelsey Doll

Posts: 14

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Nor-Cal Photography wrote:

This is probably better than most images in your MM portfolio.

But just one worthless opinion.   smile

I like people opinions though..... Some people like it some Don't, I'm personally not happy with the make up.. think it should have been a little less heavy and a little more classy.

Sep 12 14 04:08 pm Link

Model

Ms Skyye

Posts: 1356

Palm Coast, Florida, US

my opinion; less is more. i would just keep the last 6 photos you have posted their much stronger and show diversity until you've accumulated more shoots.


I also think you should add these:

https://scontent-a-atl.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xfp1/v/t1.0-9/10392298_779354212121960_6700131840788641810_n.jpg?oh=ce7df8584e3119d40b47d18bc2b859af&oe=549F1F0B

https://scontent-b-atl.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-frc3/v/t1.0-9/580205_348183951905657_2106861224_n.jpg?oh=d33ec332a668025a95d95f095bdda067&oe=549D9D3A

Sep 12 14 05:06 pm Link

Model

Miss Kelsey Doll

Posts: 14

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

https://scontent-b-atl.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-frc3/v/t1.0-9/580205_348183951905657_2106861224_n.jpg?oh=d33ec332a668025a95d95f095bdda067&oe=549D9D3A

Thank you will change that now , also the above mentioned image was taken when i was 14 as im now 20 i thought it was abit outdated?

Sep 12 14 06:23 pm Link

Model

Ms Skyye

Posts: 1356

Palm Coast, Florida, US

Miss Kelsey Doll wrote:
https://scontent-b-atl.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-frc3/v/t1.0-9/580205_348183951905657_2106861224_n.jpg?oh=d33ec332a668025a95d95f095bdda067&oe=549D9D3A

Thank you will change that now , also the above mentioned image was taken when i was 14 as im now 20 i thought it was abit outdated?

just state its older nbd. all my photos are about 2-5 years old... lol
but since your up and starting on here its good until you get more. id also, (personal opionion) not work with photographers who use color splash... unless its REAAAALLLLLLLLYYYYY well done.. which is hard to come by. lol big_smile if anything pay a GOOD local photographer to do a set of 3-4 outfits that way you can have higher quality images in your book which will help other great photographers notice and want to work with you.

another thing. PRACTICE. in front of a mirror, both posing and facial expressions. its how youll get better.

Sep 12 14 06:41 pm Link

Photographer

Fred Scholpp photo

Posts: 74

Norge, Virginia, US

Like the first and last shots in your port, also like the fact that you have some shots that show your physique.

If I were considering hiring you my biggest reservation would be, I don't see you showing me you can do expressions. Get some headshots, consider smiling, or otherwise let you face show me you are pleasant to work with. That will make you stand out more.

Hope to see more good quality shots, you have lovely feactures and physique, I love to see them really showcased!

Sep 12 14 06:59 pm Link

Model

Miss Kelsey Doll

Posts: 14

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Thank you so much will have a go at  that, also i keep getting asked on shoots usually to look serious , or angry etc' and the happy or cheeky shots i don't get sent sad

Sep 13 14 05:09 am Link