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Model

Divine Moten

Posts: 7

Delray Beach, Florida, US

Just looking for some advice I know I still need some work, leave a comment.
Thanks!!

Sep 10 14 11:34 am Link

Photographer

Mark Salo

Posts: 11725

Olney, Maryland, US

The wide angle lens and the camera angle make your legs look short.  If your inseam really is only 30", this is something that you need to take into consideration.

Sep 10 14 11:58 am Link

Photographer

IllustrativeArts

Posts: 60

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Photographer choice, posing, camera angles, posing, lens choice, posing, lighting, posing, wardrobe, posing, backgrounds and posing are all working against you.

Get some lessons or practice a LOT more, develop your eye so you are capable of making better decisions with regard to your modelling.

Sep 10 14 12:47 pm Link

Model

Porcelain_Rose

Posts: 30

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

Lift your torso up out of your pelvis.  Think about having your head connected to the sky... a little bit of a slouch is okay, but only if it's intentional.

Sep 10 14 12:56 pm Link

Photographer

Account Dead dead dead

Posts: 243

London, England, United Kingdom

Divine, you are in the same pose for every single shot!

Check out twenty successful male model portfolios, copy and practice their posing and body positions and get some variety in your port.

Good luck!

Sep 11 14 05:01 pm Link

Photographer

Ken Warren Photography

Posts: 933

GLENMOORE, Pennsylvania, US

In addition to being in almost the same pose, you also have basically the same expression for every shot. try to put a bit of emotion into your modeling; consider a beginning acting class if you can't figure it out on your own.

Sep 11 14 06:50 pm Link

Photographer

dd photography

Posts: 944

San Diego, California, US

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lift a few weights once in a while

Sep 11 14 07:11 pm Link