I would love some feedback on my latest photos.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36975478

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36975474

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36974006

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36974015

Thanks.

I am not a fan of the whites of the eyes being blasted at the camera
Think long fingers
[Pose, form a triangle with the arms move the elbows out to form a 60 degree angle, this will give the illusion of support for the head]
Due to pose model has no neck
Harsh light models left arm, could use a scrim to tone it down


Crop some of the top of photo off to get rid of brown area in upper left corner of photo
Over all a tighter crop, crop some of photo left off near models right hip, this will get rid of part of left arm which is leading viewer’s eyes off image, then halfway between right photo border and models left wrist
Over all image lacks pop, bet an adjustment in Photoshop could help with that


This one is nice
Crop to be more vertical
Photoshop out brown leaves upper left area of image [Distraction]


Crop above models knees
Crop halfway between right photo border and model, will remove her from center of photo
Pose: for me less head tilt down, move models left hand to photo right so we can see her fingers

For me I think your photos are getting stronger

Wish you well