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Quincy Benton

Posts: 4

Lithia Springs, Georgia, US

Hi there!
Although I don't plan on modeling for a career, I love it because I get to make art for the fun of it. I would like some constructive feedback on how I can make my portfolio better. Thank you.

Sep 22 14 06:53 pm Link

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ArtistryImage

Posts: 3091

Washington, District of Columbia, US

Quincy Benton wrote:
Hi there!
Although I don't plan on modeling for a career, I love it because I get to make art for the fun of it. I would like some constructive feedback on how I can make my portfolio better. Thank you.

Lose the "for the fun of it" attitude and get serious about commercial aspects of modeling...  This is a job for those in the industry... and trust me, to survive you have to absolutely love this job...

Maybe more like this in your book... excellent narrative..
albeit the technical aspects are wanting... shoot with commercial talent not hobbyist who can't achieve sharp focus...

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140407/22/53438b3d1d64a.jpg

All the best on your journey...

Sep 25 14 06:46 am Link