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Wardrobe Stylist

Pauline Luxmoore-Ball

Posts: 20

Cambridge, England, United Kingdom

Still heavily under construction but I have had a total re-brand  ....

www.APerfectLook.co.uk

What do you think so far?

Sep 26 14 11:48 am Link

Photographer

Philip R

Posts: 698

Agoura Hills, California, US

It looks great so far.

I had a problem reading "styling you for that special occasion" on the home page against the black.  You might want to put a glow or something under it so that it can be read. 
I did even know what it said (which is a problem for a home page) until I read it elsewhere on the site.

Keep up the good work!

Sep 26 14 11:57 am Link

Wardrobe Stylist

Pauline Luxmoore-Ball

Posts: 20

Cambridge, England, United Kingdom

Ok will have a look at that - thanks.

Ive styled every image on there so lots more to come - I think the web guys are 'coding' something so will see where we are by Friday.

Thanks for the positive feedback x

Sep 26 14 01:22 pm Link

Photographer

Marco R

Posts: 313

Fort Lauderdale, Florida, US

It is still in development right? Some pages do not have content yet.

It looks nice, loads fast and has a nice appealing look. I have just a few comments on details:

- Logo: I can’t read what is written in pink under “Perfect Look” use different backgroup color, different font color or different font;

- Copyright notice: too much – one is enough, and it could be more discrete placed. “| Copyright © A Perfect Look | All Images © A Perfect Look

- Third party advertisement: Unless you are getting this site for free (or partially free), this should not on any page “Built by Mad Frog Design Ltd”. My day job is on IT industry, and it is not acceptable on paid work – it is like you have your watermark on paid client photos;

Just a note of caution – beware of black background on web page design – it have done and overdone and the only way to put text and looks nice is to put a white background. The end result, depending of the page might not be great – think about a light background to start with.

Just my 2 cents,

Sep 26 14 01:56 pm Link

Model

Melissa Kat

Posts: 401

Orlando, Florida, US

The font style regarding the navigation bar hurts to read. Either bold or make larger.

Sep 26 14 02:06 pm Link

Wardrobe Stylist

Pauline Luxmoore-Ball

Posts: 20

Cambridge, England, United Kingdom

Ok great thanks - yes its still in development so will feed all of that back.

Thank you everyone

Px

Sep 27 14 09:11 am Link