I feel like my bio is boring. It may just be me, but give me some advice. The about me section only, not my photos. Oct 29 14 09:33 pm Link I personally don't see anything wrong with it and I can't see that it's boring. As my own bio sux however I can hardly stand on solid ground to think bad of someone else's. Oct 30 14 04:23 am Link I think it's fine, direct and to the point without rambling on with useless information. The only change that I would make is to correct the "applied" nude to "implied". Oct 30 14 07:56 am Link It's refreshingly concise. Better than most out there! Oct 30 14 08:27 am Link You have a misspelling, where your said "applied", rather than "implied nude". You should fix that. Otherwise, I think it is relatively clear, and appropriate, and not something you need to be concerned about. Oct 30 14 09:38 am Link It is clear and not boring. HOWEVER, and you always know there is a however, I think it is too long. As a photographer, I prefer much shorted bios. The photos in a portfolio are much more important (and they too should be limited to just a few of the best). But just one worthless opinion. Oct 30 14 09:47 am Link [As written] Hello and thank you for viewing me. My name is Misty, and I am a rubenesque model. I am looking to expand my port and get better pictures. I am fun to photograph, and I try to make the shoot fun. Laughing and joking are required at least some of the time. It makes me relax more. If it is a location shoot, I have to verify my transportation. Setting up a schedule would make it easier. My home is open up for a shoot also. I would like to have an escort, but it is negotiable. I will do TFP shoots. I am also willing to trade for my time as a model. Things I would trade for: Clothing/costumes Hair/makeup items Anything Marilyn Monroe Nail polish Gift cards Shoots I would like to do but not limited to: Pin Up/Rockabilly Classic/Vintage Fine Art Formal *AT THIS TIME I AM INTERESTED IN APPLIED NUDE, AND LINGERIE.* Not interested in full nudity yet. I am also very interested in foot modeling. My Inspiration: Tess Munster London Andrews Whitney Thompson Marilyn Monroe (I AM LOOKING FOR A MAKEUP ARTIST AND HAIR STYLIST.) [[OR]] Hello and thank you for viewing my portfolio, I‘m a rubenesque model, looking to expand my portfolio and working on improving my photos. My goal is to be fun to photograph; laughing and joking are helpful for me to relax. If it is a location shoot, I have to verify my transportation, so setting up a schedule would make it easier. My home is also open for a photo session, would like to have an escort, but it is negotiable. Will do TFP shoots or willing to trade my time as a model for clothing, costumes, hair and makeup items, nail polish gift cards and anything Marilyn Monroe in nature. Shoots I would like to do: Pin Up or Rockabilly Classic or Vintage Fine Art Formal *AT THIS TIME I AM INTERESTED IN IMPLIED, AND LINGERIE.* Not interested in full nudity yet. Very interested in foot modeling My Inspirations are: Tess Munster London Andrews Whitney Thompson Marilyn Monroe (LOOKING FOR A MAKEUP ARTIST AND HAIR STYLIST.) Oct 30 14 03:13 pm Link Thanks everyone! I am glad my pro is liked. I will change applied to implied, it was probably messed up due to the spell check on my phone. Oct 30 14 10:22 pm Link |