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Model

Misty Bradshaw

Posts: 287

Tempe, Arizona, US

I feel like my bio is boring. It may just be me, but give me some advice. The about me section only, not my photos.

Oct 29 14 09:33 pm Link

Photographer

Barry Kidd Photography

Posts: 3351

Red Lion, Pennsylvania, US

I personally don't see anything wrong with it and I can't see that it's boring.

As my own bio sux however I can hardly stand on solid ground to think bad of someone else's.

Oct 30 14 04:23 am Link

Model

MatureModelMM

Posts: 2843

Detroit, Michigan, US

I think it's fine, direct and to the point without rambling on with useless information.

The only change that I would make is to correct the "applied" nude to "implied".

Oct 30 14 07:56 am Link

Photographer

Doug Bolton Photography

Posts: 784

Victoria, British Columbia, Canada

It's refreshingly concise. Better than most out there!

Oct 30 14 08:27 am Link

Photographer

Lallure Photographic

Posts: 2086

Taylors, South Carolina, US

You have a misspelling, where your said "applied", rather than "implied nude". You should fix that.

Otherwise, I think it is relatively clear, and appropriate, and not something you need to be concerned about.

Oct 30 14 09:38 am Link

Photographer

Nor-Cal Photography

Posts: 3720

Walnut Creek, California, US

It is clear and not boring. HOWEVER, and you always know there is a however, I think it is too long.  As a photographer, I prefer much shorted bios.  The photos in a portfolio are much more important (and they too should be limited to just a few of the best).

But just one worthless opinion.   smile

Oct 30 14 09:47 am Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

[As written]
Hello and thank you for viewing me. My name is Misty, and I am a rubenesque model.

I am looking to expand my port and get better pictures.

I am fun to photograph, and I try to make the shoot fun. Laughing and joking are required at least some of the time. It makes me relax more.

If it is a location shoot, I have to verify my transportation.
Setting up a schedule would make it easier.

My home is open up for a shoot also.

I would like to have an escort, but it is negotiable.

I will do TFP shoots. I am also willing to trade for my time as a model.

Things I would trade for:
Clothing/costumes
Hair/makeup items
Anything Marilyn Monroe
Nail polish
Gift cards

Shoots I would like to do but not limited to:
Pin Up/Rockabilly
Classic/Vintage
Fine Art
Formal

*AT THIS TIME I AM INTERESTED IN APPLIED NUDE, AND LINGERIE.* Not interested in full nudity yet.


I am also very interested in foot modeling.

My Inspiration:
Tess Munster
London Andrews
Whitney Thompson
Marilyn Monroe


(I AM LOOKING FOR A MAKEUP ARTIST AND HAIR STYLIST.)


[[OR]]
Hello and thank you for viewing my portfolio, I‘m a rubenesque model, looking to expand my portfolio and working on improving my photos. My goal is to be fun to photograph; laughing and joking are helpful for me to relax.
If it is a location shoot, I have to verify my transportation, so setting up a schedule would make it easier. My home is also open for a photo session, would like to have an escort, but it is negotiable. Will do TFP shoots or willing to trade my time as a model for clothing, costumes, hair and makeup items, nail polish gift cards and anything Marilyn Monroe in nature.
Shoots I would like to do:
Pin Up or Rockabilly
Classic or Vintage
Fine Art
Formal
*AT THIS TIME I AM INTERESTED IN IMPLIED, AND LINGERIE.* Not interested in full nudity yet.
Very interested in foot modeling
My Inspirations are:
Tess Munster
London Andrews
Whitney Thompson
Marilyn Monroe

(LOOKING FOR A MAKEUP ARTIST AND HAIR STYLIST.)

Oct 30 14 03:13 pm Link

Model

Misty Bradshaw

Posts: 287

Tempe, Arizona, US

Thanks everyone! I am glad my pro is liked. I will change applied to implied, it was probably messed up due to the spell check on my phone.

Oct 30 14 10:22 pm Link