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Just posted 2 photos from a pin up photo shoot I did last weekend.Would love to hear your thoughts good or bad. Thanks! Gem Oct 30 14 08:01 am Link The first one doesn't do much for me and, at least to me, doesn't really look pinup. Retro, yes, but not pinup. I really love the second one though! Oct 30 14 08:37 am Link Photographic Adventures wrote: thank you so much for your feedback!] Oct 30 14 09:25 am Link Not really sure which ones you are referring to, specifically, but your best image is number 16. If you are referring to numbers 10,11, and 12, I would opt for number 12, but I really would have liked your head tilted back, and to the side a little, to get more of the face in the image. Oct 30 14 09:43 am Link Photographic Adventures wrote: I basically agree. However, the right leg seems somewhat awkward. Oct 30 14 09:49 am Link Lallure Photographic wrote: Are you counting from the top, making number 16 the one of me laying down in the black? Sorry if they are numbered and I'm missing it somehow. Oct 30 14 10:15 am Link Gem Taylor wrote: There are no numbers. Most of us consider the first row to be 1, 2, 3, and 4. Second row 5, 6, etc. So you are correct that 16 is the one lying down on your back. Oct 30 14 11:38 am Link  This one is not working for me Busy background and busy dress  This one is stronger Wish the background was less dominating You nailed this as far as the modeling, great expression Wish you well Oct 30 14 02:37 pm Link I count from top left to bottom right, yes. Gem Taylor wrote: Oct 30 14 04:00 pm Link they're okay, not very pin up in my opinion #2 is your best though. Oct 30 14 04:41 pm Link Not so much pin-up which imply both flirty and provocative and you totally seem to have the capability to do. Oct 30 14 06:51 pm Link Hensley Photography wrote: I completely agree.Thank you for your feedback.] Oct 31 14 09:55 am Link Your styling in number 1 is good but the pose and overall feel isnt pin up. Number 2 is a better pin up pose and expression (y) Nov 03 14 11:31 am Link |
