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Paint a Pose

Posts: 364

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

so ... what worked and what didn't ?

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141031/18/5454342f3871f_m.jpg

Oct 31 14 09:42 pm Link

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Blaschke

Posts: 137

New Braunfels, Texas, US

Just from a character standpoint, I'd suggest a bolder, more aggressive pose projecting strength, confidence and power. This pose is passive. Wonder Woman should never be passive.

Nov 01 14 12:37 pm Link

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J O H N A L L A N

Posts: 12221

Los Angeles, California, US

The shadows in the hair are blocked up.
The eyes look like you tried to correct their focus in post.
The exposure on the skin is a bit dark.

Nov 01 14 12:56 pm Link

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Fleming Design

Posts: 1380

East Hartford, Connecticut, US

Well, she sure looks like she is wondering!

Nov 01 14 01:40 pm Link

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F O R B E S

Posts: 576

New York, New York, US

Not feeling the editing and facial expression. Looks like she's constipated. You'll get an E for effort though.  Cheers.

Nov 01 14 05:49 pm Link

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Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141031/18/5454342f3871f_m.jpg
She looks like some one just pushed her backward and she is going to fall
Modeled light on face is distracting
Tension in neck
A stronger crop would be above her elbows
Hair looks washed out at shoulders and lacking detail on top of head [too dark]

Cute touch with diamond by corner of eye

Nov 02 14 04:16 am Link