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I'm a new photographer and really thin skinned, so be nice. What do you think works best in my port, and what should I do more of? Nov 23 14 08:32 pm Link Learn to get thick skin..Its the only way you will grow..Composition is off on most all your pics..Retouching is been overdone as well...Lighting needs work..Use your main lighting patterns..Expressions of models are Meh... Good Luck... Nov 23 14 09:44 pm Link So my work basically sucks in all respects? Thanks. Nov 23 14 10:44 pm Link Don't let that be your takeaway from the previous comment. Your work doesn't suck; it just shows that you're still on your way up. Take the actual critiques to heart and learn from them. Keep experimenting and having fun with it, and don't be worried whether you're "there" yet. Asking for gentle critique here also just shows a lack of experience on this site -- you're not going to get handled with kid gloves by most commenters here. For what it's worth, this is my favorite image of yours:  I like the contrast of shapes and textures. The muted colors are nice, and this could also work as B&W. But I don't love the image, and here's why: 1. There is a little halo at the top of the umbrella, which is distracting. It betrays a problem with your processing, probably overprocessing in that area, maybe trying to sharpen too much? 2. I'm not sure why it's important that the subject is a ballet dancer, or why she's hidden under an umbrella where she's clearly not going to get wet. That said, at least there does seem to be some kind of story being told here. Keep going... Nov 23 14 11:34 pm Link Elise Imagery wrote: If you get defensive when people pick apart your photos, dont ask for critiques. Nov 23 14 11:46 pm Link One cannot critique without being honest. If you seek only positive comments, without any negative comments, then I can be of no service to you, because both the good, and the not as good, must be discussed. Nov 24 14 06:16 am Link  Most people do not seem to look good upside down, which probably stems from the fact few people walk on there hands when we see them in the street. The white part of models eyes looks off too  Up the nose shots are not the most flattering of angles [Hi, you]  I like a lot about this image [Why not show more of the model and less of the bench?] For me you used too wide a lens, you are getting perspective distortion, {making her nose look big}  The backward tilt and out of focus eyes plus the up the nose angle are not working for me  Odd bend at models left elbow Wish left hand were in photo too, placed on hip or tummy Interesting photo [What would have happened if you were lying on the ground when you took this photo?]  Show all of her hands please, bit of a tilt too  Great looking models and pose Image seems washed out, elbow looks out of place You have a great eye for photography Happy Thanksgiving Nov 24 14 03:10 pm Link I think this is the best shoot on your port:  that enhances your creativity (better with eye a little more open). I think it would be better if you enhance your creativity until your skill reach a sufficient level to make more "standard" shoot. Nov 26 14 04:14 am Link I agree with the above comments, your portfolio is not strong for now, but neither was mine when I started (and still may not be). I started shooting about a year and half ago and have asked for critiques from time to time. The more critical the better as far as I'm concerned. Remember that people are offering you their own opinion based upon their shooting style and likes and dislikes - you don't have to agree with them but try to understand what they are saying and learn from it. Incorporate the advice and input you receive with your own artistic impressions and ability and you will develop your own style. Gauge your success on how you are developing, not on where you are. Nov 26 14 07:46 am Link |
