I would appreciate to get your view/thoughts/feedback on my portfolio.

www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/2331284/viewall

thank you.

Niels

Try to do more like the ballerina image. It is by far, your best image.

Blue is my favorite color, so naturally this will draw my attention
Love her pose
Because the camera is low her eyes look a bit closed, if camera were higher they would appear more open and we would not be looking up her nose as much
Think a rim light or back light on her hair would add some dynamics


Another great model with a wonderful pose
Not crazy about the hot spots and then you have the shadow on models left arm and body


This is an intense image
Will call this best in your portfolio


Why hide her beautiful eyes behind sunglasses?
The fabric on top looks washed out, face seems to have an off tint [Could be the sunglass color]
Fill the bottom of the frame have model move left arm off to side a bit to eliminate gap in lower right corner of photo



Place hips on more of an angle to camera
Adjust hair so it falls more smoothly [Bunched up by shoulders]

Happy Thanksgiving

Thank you Lallure and Lee for your feedback, very much appreciated.

I would be happy for more feedback form other MM users as well!

Niels

Hi NIELS, interesting images

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