July 06, 2011 4:08pm Great face, hair and and pose. The lighting makes this shot alive. One thing is to consider is your hands: Make sure they read feminine in shots like this. and the left arm is foreshortened too much and so it is reading as very distracting. The focus should be on your face, waist and back. When your posing think your way through each body part making small adjustments to one joint at a time.