June 30, 2013 10:36pm i recently retouched a photo from the same set. with this photo i think you can take the dodge and burn to the next level. you can compare to mine for an example. i think were you need the most practice in dodge and burn. your skin texture and basic cleanup is good. you can delete this after you read this. its just the easiest way to help you since you asked for it on the forum.