February 15, 2010 12:49pm Here again a little simplification would go a long way! The lines that my eyes draw towards is the wall and the lawn chair-why? Why wouldn't the unbelievable lines in your physique get the attention??? Really a close up of the obliques and serratus muscles as well as the mass of your lats, arms and breast should not be covered up by a lawn chair. I love your pose-classic! And great job at keeping your neck, but your photographer should have adjusted to keep your face in the shot not hid behind your shoulders.
Really I love this themed shoot and I hope you can post more at some point. Maybe a B/W shot closer up and at a higher viewpoint could have fixed most everything.