February 05, 2016 2:05pm Jay,
So you know, I'm not going to partake in the one and two word worshiping I see here. You must be tired of it too.
I'm commenting on this photo but it is representative of most of your portfolio.
I briefly read your bio, then after looking at your folio, I read it again. Your passion in your bio doesn't match your folio. Let me explain.
I like this pictures but they aren't dynamic enough. Needs something more. It's the expression, isn't saying anything except maybe BORED, or way cool, in a lot of your shots. Can you see what I am saying? You could have been so much more expressive. At least your eyes look like they could be. Professionals like myself want to create EMOTIONS and FEELINGS. Not just pretty girls in photos. We need WOW, dynamics, tension, attraction, desire. I WANT to WANT you, to FEEL your emotions whatever they are, to KNOW something from inside you, to experience your passion, otherwise I could just photograph a mannequin. I want you to work hard for it, with the PASSION and sweat and dedication you have in your bio.
It's MY responsibility to create the atmosphere and pull what I want while I guide you to our goal, it's YOUR responsibility to feel and project and then blow us away...
Catch you later
SteveG
