May 20, 2019 8:08am You are SOOOOOO full of promise in this and many other images.
The good photogs look first for in their subjects is eye contact. Is she/he looking at me or to me? More, is her/his eye contact compelling, must I look back and into? Better, can she/he command attention? Most, can she/he tell me a story with their eye contact, can I discover something about them or is there a place for me to make up my own story? The model’s persona is, or can/should be, more important than how they look.
I can look back into you, and I see a refreshing, fun person, someone I would like to know better. More, this image holds me.