January 22, 2009 8:46pm I would have to agree with the other photographer below me. there is a stiffness in this shot, but i think it works in terms of having this classical look. the naturality will come with experience but the look doesn't. you look like a young James Dean esp in this shot. I would also agree with the darker hair. overall, you have a great face and an extreme potential.
July 01, 2008 12:52am i am going to give a short critique and i mean it truly and not to sound rude to further your career as a model. firstly you look a bit stiff here it could be because the sun was too bright and you were squinting but your shoulders look a bit tense. you also have the very american classic look i think if you darken your hair it would really bring out your eyes. thats all i have to say
