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Steinberg Photo

Posts: 1218

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Sep 08 05 09:31 pm Link

Photographer

area291

Posts: 2525

Calabasas, California, US

How do you see this image being used?  And by whom? 

I'm not sure it was kept in mind where a modeling image compels the viewer to take action in some form.  So the obvious question falls back to you insofar as defining intent.

Sep 08 05 09:39 pm Link

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Michael Crouch

Posts: 457

San Diego, California, US

It doesn't do much for me... The back lighting is working well... Don't like the ripple in the sheer coming off of the nipple. Overall it's not a bad pic, Just not working for me.

Sep 09 05 12:14 am Link

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tanya k

Posts: 36

Brooklyn, New York, US

forget what it's doing for me...it's not doing anything for you at all....the lighting, there isn't any...and it's just not flattering. strike it. good light is the key, remember that.

Sep 09 05 03:13 am Link

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brett ferguson

Posts: 329

Sacramento, California, US

looks like too many other pix. Model has no expression, face is poorly lit, and it looks like a shower curtain is sticking to her. You can do better....

Sep 09 05 10:23 am Link