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Photographer

FootNote Fotography

Posts: 18809

Gainesville, Florida, US

ok be gentel...

https://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b185/footnote-in-memory/no-back-bone-web.jpg

edit: oopes forgot to ask what could be better.. and do you think i over did the glow effect? i like it but i would like to hear other views

Sep 18 05 04:44 pm Link

Photographer

Robert A Photography

Posts: 464

Kenosha, Wisconsin, US

I would like to see it before you added the 'glow' filter.   Seems to be a bit overdone.

Sep 18 05 04:48 pm Link

Photographer

FootNote Fotography

Posts: 18809

Gainesville, Florida, US

sorry i got dial up

https://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b185/footnote-in-memory/no-back-bone-noglow-web.jpg

Sep 18 05 04:53 pm Link

Model

Envy

Posts: 11189

Nashville, Tennessee, US

First shoot with an model?
I'm damn impressed.
I like the 2nd image better though, you went a bit overboard on the glow in the first shot.
Great job!

Sep 18 05 05:22 pm Link

Photographer

FootNote Fotography

Posts: 18809

Gainesville, Florida, US

Envy --

thanks those words actualy mean somthing coming from you, yeah after looking at them side by side i just shook my head.. i turned her in to a gost lol.. but i did put a little glow in i have the photo in my port now

Sep 18 05 05:44 pm Link

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Christopher Hartman

Posts: 54196

Buena Park, California, US

Great job Foot!  I think I'm partial to the "glow" pic but...perhaps if you can do the effect while retaining more color from the original?

Sep 18 05 07:23 pm Link

Model

Envy

Posts: 11189

Nashville, Tennessee, US

Footnote wrote:
Envy --

thanks those words actualy mean somthing coming from you, yeah after looking at them side by side i just shook my head.. i turned her in to a gost lol.. but i did put a little glow in i have the photo in my port now

You're welcome. smile

I'm glad you did a location shoot for one and two I've seen people who have been "doing this for years" not come close to what you've achieved with your first model.
You should be proud of yourself.

Sep 18 05 09:03 pm Link

Photographer

Images By Ijumo

Posts: 282

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Envy wrote:

You're welcome. smile

I'm glad you did a location shoot for one and two I've seen people who have been "doing this for years" not come close to what you've achieved with your first model.
You should be proud of yourself.

I agree you should be very proud.. it is a great shot... if you still have the image in layers i would suggest lowering the opacity of the "glow" layer to allow the tru color to show through.  keep up the good work

Sep 18 05 09:32 pm Link

Photographer

FootNote Fotography

Posts: 18809

Gainesville, Florida, US

thats the "finished" shot and thanks for all the kind words

https://www.modelmayhem.com/pics/20050918/3/432e037deaba7.jpg

Sep 19 05 03:26 am Link