Tim Hammond wrote:
Always interested in ways to improve. Thanks!

The photo with the nipples tied is lit SO well! If you could light faces that way....wow. I'd like to see what you were capable of with those kinds of lighting skills...

Avicdar - Toronto wrote:
I'd be grateful to hear that one thing.  More than one if you like!  I need a fresh perspective.

I love your fashion shots, and the black and whites. The headshots are very commercial looking...but you have definite skills. I think you excell at fashion shooting though

Kat Livingston wrote:

I like the pics with the men's wear look. Very sexy! I would try to do some beauty work, or at least get a good clear headshot for your port

Thanks!

Alixday wrote:
I'm game.

I like the mask shots.Sorry I can't be much help, it's not really my thing

Kat Livingston wrote:

The photo with the nipples tied is lit SO well! If you could light faces that way....wow. I'd like to see what you were capable of with those kinds of lighting skills...

Thanks!  I'll see if I can build on that.

Kat Livingston wrote:

I love your fashion shots, and the black and whites. The headshots are very commercial looking...but you have definite skills. I think you excell at fashion shooting though

Well, thank you - was the 1 thing to make me better to tell me to stick with fashion?

Kat Livingston wrote:

I think your hair is too mousey for your attitiude. Maybe a fiery red, or darker brown would help? Nice work though

haha I've heard that before. I don't particularly understand it, but I'd LOVE to be fiery red I'll work on that

thanks!

Kat Livingston wrote:

I really like some of your photos, they seem very soulfull. Some of the others could use some work. The lighting seems dull on some making the images seem flat.

Thanks!! Actually my monitor needed calibration - and MM does not let you keep comments and just replace images... will update the adjusted images! thanks again..

Ash

PS: Hope to get time to shoot you at the next shoot out for sure...

Kat Livingston wrote:
Okay, once again, I'm nursing my jaw after the last of my wisom teeth were finally pulled....
SO! I will tell you ONE thing, in my honest opinion, that you could do to make yourself/ or your port better!

*EDIT* I am done for the night. Feel free to post and I WILL get to you tomorrow!

oooh tell me!

Kat Livingston wrote:

I can't see you! You're always either looking away, or hidden in shadow! Let's see some clear photos of that lovely face! I do enjoy the bottom pics in the old 20's style

Thanks you! Yes, my first few photographers were students. I am starting to work with better photographers, can't wait to see the results! I will be at HON as well

Kat Livingston wrote:

Your photos feel candid. As though they (people) were there, and you just shot them. Kinda like paparazzi. You know what I mean? I think you could do quite well at that, and selling your pics to the celebrity dish-mags. If you want to do photos more around models, work more with your lighting to create light and shadows.

Thanx! I know what you mean and appreciate your comments Lighting is exactly what I'm working on so I'd say you're spot on Hope you feel better soon and thanx once again!

MissLoLo wrote:
aw shucks

Stay blonde! Those 3 new photos are amazing! The candy colored hair doesn't work for you IMO.

Kelli Kills wrote:
Lets hear it

One thing? Move to NYC!! You rock! You are an artist, and a muse to other artists. I'm in awe.
Oh, and do more beauty work, that face is unbelievable!!

Avicdar - Toronto wrote:

Well, thank you - was the 1 thing to make me better to tell me to stick with fashion?

Not so much to stick with only fashion, but to shoot more of it, you do it really well!

Silver Bullet Studios wrote:
If you continue doing these I would love your opinion

Some of your photos look shakey. Try using a tripod. I like the balloon photos the best.

Zubi wrote:

oooh tell me!

You are so beautiful, and you photograph much taller than you are I would say to try some creative concepts. Wild hair and make-up, high-fashion clothing...
you can do anything you set out to do!

Haus of Hadz wrote:
Hey there. Just wishing you a speedy recovery.

So... what should I improve upon?

Thanks I woudl say to be more creative with your angles, you could move around the models and shoot from above, below, sidways, etc. not always shooting from infront will help add a lot of variety.

Gwendolyn Kaye wrote:
me?

You have a beautiful face, but like Tyra Banks, you have a large forehead. I would suggest blunt cut bangs, or layered bangs that can sweep across it. I think it will help your look dramatically!

brandy pruitt wrote:
if you continue i'd love to know.

Your current hair style is really not helping you. I can't believe that the last photo in your port is the same girl! That style with the flowing hair is fantastic. The new style is too boxy and you have a face that should be SEEN not covered up!

Denise Luna wrote:
Me please.

You have very lovely- but large lips, try working on facial expressions, and maybe relax your mouth more, or even part your lips a little.

Brandi_Renee wrote:
still going?

I think you could try pin-up Also get some full length shots for your port, head to toe.

kevdh wrote:
New to this but always ready to improve!

If you want please

I'd like to see you in something casual. Outside of a suit:)

Michael McGowan wrote:
Talk to another photographer. Please?

Your last photo is the best lit.Many of your photos. while not my style, are very dark. Work on lighting.

gracie_lou wrote:
me please:)

You need headshots!You have a lovely face, let's see it!

iTOONZ wrote:
next!!

The last few photos in your port are amazing! Do more stuff like that!