Hi, Just got some images back from a shoot and have been torn with the decision of which to post. Let me know your thoughts.

All my best,

Katlyn

Wow, love the light, but top one, I think you need that space between model and edge of frame.

Edit: In fact if I took these (I wish) I would go for a square crop.

neither? you have several shots like this in your portfolio. this doesn't even show that it's you (other than implied since you posted it). maybe if you were publishing a book.

you have a lot of good shots...but also have a lot of duplicates. i'm new to MM so i'm trying to understand the urge of many to post several similar images.

again, you have a lot of good shots...but these aren't necessary to add. they don't bring anything new to your portfolio.

I really like both...!!
I like the message of #1 and I like the geometries built into #2

Both are great... and both could be stellar!
I think #1 is better suited for a models portfolio, and #2 for a photographers
I would process both!

I would rotate for level and add black negative space at the top
and then crop for composition using both 'rule of thirds' and 'corner 45s'...
what I mean is where those 2 composition rules meet.

{edit}
How in the hell is it that I've never seen your portfolio until now?
Wonderful work!

Top one - the models are more symmetrical and balanced.  The 2nd one looks like her feet are ready to topple.

Little things rather than composition...

Oh Sorry, models port, to much beer.
The second one then, just like the pose and lighting better.

Edit: just looked at your port, theres some very impressive images in there.

Top one for sure!
The bottom feels too cramped.

Definately the top one.

none.
I think it should be a vertical crop like your avatar with enough empty space on top.