Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Photographer

Studio La Rouge

Posts: 2

Irving, Texas, US

Well this should be fun

Apr 12 13 11:11 pm Link

Photographer

EnlightendedPhotography

Posts: 823

Eugene, Oregon, US

Want to be the female model in my avatar?

Apr 12 13 11:33 pm Link

Photographer

wendy haigh

Posts: 517

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Wanna drive a vintage car??? smile

Apr 12 13 11:44 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

StudioKawaii wrote:
Curious to know

I'm going to say maybe. I really like the outfit and it shows off the model's great figure but the pose is a little stiff and the shadows are a bit much. Also the model's expression is not very good.

Like better (CHANGE YOUR AVATAR TO ONE OF THESE! smile:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130401/23/515a755d449fd_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130410/07/5165723eada57_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130401/23/515a755486eb3_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130410/09/5165944a8e646_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130330/11/5157344b3adf8_m.jpg

Apr 13 13 12:14 am Link

Photographer

StudioKawaii

Posts: 26

Los Angeles, California, US

winking_wonder wrote:

I'm going to say maybe. I really like the outfit and it shows off the model's great figure but the pose is a little stiff and the shadows are a bit much. Also the model's expression is not very good.

Like better (CHANGE YOUR AVATAR TO ONE OF THESE! smile:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130401/23/515a755d449fd_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130410/07/5165723eada57_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130401/23/515a755486eb3_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130410/09/5165944a8e646_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130330/11/5157344b3adf8_m.jpg

Thank you for taking the time to look and thanks for the feedback!

Apr 13 13 07:32 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Bearz Images wrote:
You tell me.

Maybe. However, the very first thing I notice is that it looks like the model's ear is distorted- It's stretched way out and on closer inspection I can tell it's an earring but it would be better without it. The model looks nice though and I always like the wind in the hair look and the outfit is really cute. Lighting and colors are good. Pose and expression is just okay.

Like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120628/13/4fecbf93d9361_m.jpg

Apr 13 13 09:11 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Scoria wrote:
Sure smile

Yes. You are beautiful. I love the style of your hair and the flowers on top of your head-- pretty colors too. The green dress you have on is also really nice and go well with the rest of the image. I also like your posing. The expression however is quite blank- would love to see more engagement.

Apr 13 13 10:27 pm Link

Photographer

Casey Wrightsman Photo

Posts: 25

San Diego, California, US

sure!

Apr 14 13 12:29 am Link

Model

Snuff Elles

Posts: 593

ADGER, Alabama, US

Give me a go please tongue

Apr 14 13 01:09 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

SeaJae - Cirque Studios wrote:

Apr 14 13 06:21 pm Link

Photographer

Woody01

Posts: 11

Birmingham, Alabama, US

I'm curious

Apr 14 13 06:29 pm Link

Model

Scarlett de la Calle

Posts: 414

Canberra, Australian Capital Territory, Australia

well would you? I may not suit your taste tongue

Apr 14 13 06:36 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Mister Sifuentes wrote:
shoot.

I would say maybe. The background is quite dark and paired with the black outfit (though it's a nice outfit and looks good on the model) is not really my taste. But I like the model's overall look and love her hair! The makeup looks good too but expression is a little blank.

Apr 14 13 07:13 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Alicia Shank wrote:
you tell me ?! smile

Yes. You have a beautiful look. Your hair is really nice- love the sort of layered, wavy style. Your eyes and other facial features are lovely, as is your makeup. But I see a dangling earring on your right ear but not the ear that is closer to the camera.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130404/10/515db1f082b79_m.jpg

Apr 15 13 12:18 pm Link

Model

Miss Ava Taylor

Posts: 50

Amsterdam, Noord-Holland, Netherlands

I have a new avatar so please let me know!

Apr 15 13 12:58 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Renato Dirrezi wrote:
I'd like to give it a go please :3

I would say maybe. I like the clarity of the image and the color scheme but the model's pose is boring -looks like he's just standing there. Also the expression is quite blank. Nice capture of upper body physique on the model though and I think the background is cool.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121005/05/506ecf8411d27_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121109/17/509da85c77a53_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130407/18/516218f577205_m.jpg

Apr 15 13 01:30 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Apparition Photography wrote:
Why not... something creative and out-of-the-box though smile

Probably not as this is not really my style. It's too dark but the shadow of the model is done well- as is the posing and making herself look like a fox!

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100228/23/4b8b7351c1311_m.jpg

Apr 15 13 08:24 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

ImageBeautique wrote:
Do tell

Yes. The makeup is done gorgeously- Love the red lips (though would be nice to see them a bit glossier) and the eyes look great especially with the long lashes.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121127/07/50b4dd9b37aaa_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120906/14/50491c5f0f420_m.jpg

Apr 15 13 08:35 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

C Tierney wrote:
Would love your thoughts please!

Probably I like the soft lighting and color scheme. The llama has a cute outfit on that shows off her figure and the pose is decent, though arms are a bit awkward. Expression also needs work -- looks like you're just staring.

Like even better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130321/14/514b79887fc54_m.jpg

Apr 16 13 10:12 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Sharkie Mac wrote:
I would like to know please smile

I would say maybe. I like the color of your hair and the water background is cool but your expression is really blank and pose is not that interesting. Nice makeup though.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111207/12/4edfcfc1dff97_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120517/23/4fb5f2747cebb_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130129/05/5107d510ba8e2_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31283039 18+

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28535569 18+

Apr 16 13 08:27 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Lora Christine wrote:
Whatcha think? wink

Yes. You have a lovely look. I especially like your dark reddish hair and the style it is in. Great makeup! The outfit looks good on you though not sure I like the green splashes on the purple dress. Your necklace is a nice touch but your expression is a bit blank.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130402/09/515b01710d054_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130402/09/515b01c0b9fb1_m.jpg

Apr 17 13 10:40 am Link

Photographer

Traveling Light

Posts: 91

Los Angeles, California, US

I'm in...
big_smile

Apr 17 13 02:03 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Extrosy wrote:
Are you claustrophobic?

I would work with you. I like the different colors of the model's panties and the long hair going down her back looks good. The whole box concept is really cool too. The model revealing her full bare back in the center image is nice.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130115/21/50f638820ed21_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121120/20/50ac563790033_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121107/22/509b4fa8da871_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32040372 18+

Apr 17 13 08:37 pm Link

Photographer

Remy Brown Photography

Posts: 157

BOISE, Idaho, US

Well, I might as well throw myself in there. smile Impressive response rate!

Apr 18 13 03:09 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

CJR Photography wrote:
Please

Maybe. I don't love black backgrounds, especially paired with black outfit and black guitar. But I love the pretty lighting spots/colors and the clear quality of the image is great. Model's pose is good- natural, relaxed and I like her curly red hair. Expression could be more engaging though.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090410/20/49e013529edaf_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/081207/03/493b881b37b16_m.jpg

Apr 18 13 09:36 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

AndyS wrote:
Why not?

No. This type of gritty image is not my style. The model's eye makeup and skin are dark.. I also dislike the crop and the model's hands look awkward. Model does have a nice look though with blond hair/green eyes.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121222/18/50d66739bca07_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080504/10/481dc205286d9_m.jpg

Apr 18 13 01:17 pm Link

Model

Corbeau Lis

Posts: 12

Eastbourne, England, United Kingdom

Im Game!

Apr 18 13 01:26 pm Link

Model

Wynd Mulysa

Posts: 8612

Berkeley, California, US

Me me me me.

Apr 18 13 02:17 pm Link

Photographer

Cupcake Paparazzi

Posts: 434

Los Angeles, California, US

Let's play a game.

Apr 18 13 02:56 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

glamourit wrote:
hi Kathy...what do you think?

I would say probably. I like the color scheme a lot- pink is my favorite color! The image on the left: That pink dress on the model is looks good but the way the model's posed and the dress is makes it so that you can see her skull tattoo- Not sure if that was on purpose? And her expression in this shot looks worried/awkward. Nice hair/makeup and jewelry though. The image on the right side: Nice capture of model's facial features and expression is better.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130319/18/514913e99690b_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130304/17/51354ef539086_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130304/18/51355f0b0f7cf_m.jpg

Apr 18 13 03:15 pm Link

Model

Katzen Lynx

Posts: 323

Belmont, New Hampshire, US

Not sure If I've done this already, but lets give it a shot

Apr 18 13 03:19 pm Link

Photographer

cheshiredave

Posts: 183

Emeryville, California, US

I'll play.

Apr 18 13 04:00 pm Link

Photographer

glamourit

Posts: 158

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Luv you for saying...Kathy/Gunther

Apr 18 13 04:27 pm Link

Photographer

robert b mitchell

Posts: 1454

Surrey, British Columbia, Canada

Would I work with you???? tongue

Apr 18 13 04:34 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Rainbow Candy wrote:
Trying something different this time. What do you think? It's sort of cinematographic! In my very humble opinion.

No. First off, the image quality isn't great -- a bit blurry, the crop at the top is too severe and composition of you being right in the middle isn't that interesting. Your shirt is okay but I think something more form fitting and solid colored would've worked better. Also having your arm on the table like that- looks awkward and your expression looks blank/bored.

Apr 19 13 08:01 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

dayplace wrote:
Just put in a new image as an avatar, so I'm curious to hear your opinion, thanks!

Yes. I like the bright colors and lighting. The model is pretty and posing is okay but the arm in the forefront could be better placed. I like the hairstyle and cut on the model but not sure why half of her hair is covering her face. Also, expression needs some work. Overall I like the shot though and think the background is cool.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130130/00/5108d9b647db6_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130411/21/516790535954c_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130130/00/5108ddbb20c0c_m.jpg

Apr 19 13 10:09 am Link

Model

shibaswindler

Posts: 205

Milton Keynes, England, United Kingdom

Me please smile

Apr 19 13 10:48 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Hair plus Makeup wrote:
I can use some help. Let me know smile

No. The image is of low quality- blurred and the crop isn't very good. I can't make out the eyeshadow colors too well and lips don't look like they have any color/shine on them. The eyeliner looks nice but eyeshadow looks a bit clumpy.

I like better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130318/22/5147f3ded7798_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130411/00/516665c8c3d9f_m.jpg

Apr 19 13 08:12 pm Link

Photographer

Mark Callen Photography

Posts: 260

Buffalo, New York, US

Well...Would you?
Thanks!
Mark

Apr 19 13 08:31 pm Link

Model

Genny Rebekah

Posts: 13

Sacramento, California, US

Me, please!

Apr 19 13 08:56 pm Link