Kendrah Astira wrote:
I've got to know! Trying to improve before my move!

I like your first row... not so much the second.

May_Bee wrote:
Please tell me

I really really like your look, however May bee you can edit a few ones out that don't really stand up to the others.

Phan Nguyen Nguyen wrote:
If you are still going. Thanks a lot!
If you think there are pics that I should take down, kindly let me know as well. Much appreciated.

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That must go!
Love the one of you "floating" a take it back on filters and photoshop a little.

JWC54321 wrote:
Hit me. Thanks.

I really like your style... I would take out one or two pics, and try increasing the black levels a tad...

cvltblood wrote:
Pretty interested

www.cvltblood.com

Something about them I really like.

cmonmor wrote:

I really really like your look, however May bee you can edit a few ones out that don't really stand up to the others.

Thank you a lot for taking your time! If you could link me those few ones, I would really appreciate that
Maya

Lily Sunbird wrote:
I love to hear your opinion!

You even seem to have a selfie... No professional work yet.. Seems like the best you have so far is someone who bought a "pro camera" and is now a photographer. Find a decent photographer and try again.

Bricksss wrote:
Ok, I'd like to know what you think about my work

Its pretty... but nothing really stands out...

Jaye Ashay wrote:
Please give me some critique, I could really use some fresh feedback.

First whole row is the same shoot same shot actually just cropped at different points... You need more work on there. And edit down what you have.

glamourit wrote:
Any impressions... Milomo.

I've done you before.

cmonmor wrote:
feelings will get hurt

Hurt me baby.

kane wrote:

Hurt me baby.

I love your shit! I can't hurt you!

Streammer wrote:
What will you tell about my retouch?

Nothing special... What is special is the pictures of yourself... They are creepy as hell! posting pictures of yourself makes you look creepy!

cmonmor wrote:
So I miss the good old fashion critique we used to do at school. Would you like some of that? I'll try to be as objective and to the point as possible, that means feelings will get hurt, oh and please feel free to do the same with my work.

UPDATE:
So I've already had two or three messages telling me what a son of a bitch I am, and how big of an asshole I am... I repeat, if you want an honest critique, I will do it, if you want an ego boost, look elsewhere.

I am up for it, bring it on asshole!

Julia Weber wrote:

I am up for it, bring it on asshole!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 4#35649123
That need to come off!! you are very pretty... you look a little mentally challenged on that one... They are really nice yearbook pics, but they are all the same... You have a long way.

Ahmad Amin Photography wrote:
I'm in!

Its nice but too repetitive... some models I would just get rid of. And for fucks sake change your profile! A picture of your "studio" with the disclaimer on there actually has the complete opposite effect of what you are trying to achieve... It just makes you sound creepy as shit.

Jill Tedford wrote:
I'd love some constructive criticism!

I can't say I have any complaints... love your first pic... and although I like the pic of you in the sweater on the stairs, there is something about the way you are sitting that  I don't like.

remisue16 wrote:
Count me in!

Nothing special... a Little cheesy actually... Specially the one on the bike... Those are assured to be cheesy...

Knight Vision Imaging wrote:
Would love to know your thoughts.   I know I have too many images and esp too many similar ones, working on that.   

thanks.

You are right. You have 90 pics up, and I feel you could showcase with 15. Some cool concepts, but you can't do them with every model you shoot... Edit down, and on your profile you state you have "limited equipment"... Don't say that, no one gives a shit. It is really the terrible photographers that will list the equipment they use... I honestly only do natural light, and a 50mm lense... I have a shitload other things, but never ever use them...

cmonmor wrote:

Its nice but too repetitive... some models I would just get rid of. And for fucks sake change your profile! A picture of your "studio" with the disclaimer on there actually has the complete opposite effect of what you are trying to achieve... It just makes you sound creepy as shit.

Thanks. I'm still pretty new to photography and is still developing a portfolio that I'm comfortable with.

And regarding the studio shot on my profile, I never though of it like that. I thought it would make models aware of the my shooting situation rather than them having to find out later on and not being comfortable with it then.

Rich Olson wrote:
Go for it!

its not that it is bad... But I just don;t like it at all... Kind of cheesy for my taste and very repetitive... And the models are just trying too hard.

cmonmor wrote:

I can't say I have any complaints... love your first pic... and although I like the pic of you in the sweater on the stairs, there is something about the way you are sitting that  I don't like.

I can see that..
Thank you for your feedback!

John Downward wrote:
feel free to pull my portfolio apart always helpful to know where to improve

Its actually quite good! However, first or second pic has to go... They are the same... The choice is yours my friend.