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Model

TiffanyLesley

Posts: 84

Brisbane, Queensland, Australia

Im interested haha

Jan 03 15 05:12 pm Link

Model

Syrena Fury

Posts: 177

Palm Bay, Florida, US

Yes please and thank you! smile

Jan 03 15 06:36 pm Link

Photographer

phantom of the light

Posts: 114

Albuquerque, New Mexico, US

If you're still at this after four years, I would like a crit.  You've told so many to "go outside", you might tell me to go back in!
I have very little experience shooting nudes, but I can only get better if I know what I'm doing wrong.

Jan 03 15 07:22 pm Link

Photographer

MVK Photo

Posts: 463

Augusta, Georgia, US

could always use some honest critique.

Jan 03 15 07:53 pm Link

Photographer

Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 3716

San Cristóbal de las Casas, Chiapas, Mexico

Sure!

Jan 03 15 09:18 pm Link

Model

StephBar

Posts: 165

Seattle, Washington, US

Anything you've got to say about my work would be appreciated as I am building my port again with trades.. I hope to change out every old image for a nicer one, or get premium and categorize them like I did when I first started.

My feelings wont' get hurt. I have some grainy ones in there right now, and I know it.

Thank you!

-Stephanie

Jan 03 15 10:48 pm Link

Photographer

Melissa Wenger

Posts: 251

Virginia Beach, Virginia, US

Hi!  I'd love to hear from you!

Jan 04 15 11:04 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

OliviaNicole22 wrote:
I'd love if you could critique my portfolio....thanks! smile

Very nice, I would just edit out a few that are not quite as good as the other ones.

Jan 05 15 09:25 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

steph000 wrote:
Yes please

ITs just there... pretty amateurish...

Jan 05 15 09:26 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

remisue16 wrote:
My portfolio is almost completely new since the last time. Would love to hear what you think!

Love the underwater ones... The other ones, there is nothing wrong with them, but I'm not a fan.

Jan 05 15 09:27 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

thigpenimages wrote:
Honesty is the best policy. Let's here it. No tears.

They are well done, but do absolutely nothing for me.

Jan 05 15 09:28 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

tbrown1 wrote:
Dont beat me up too bad

Then don't play!

Jan 05 15 09:28 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

Cai Cai wrote:
And me?

So... you like gagging girls, huh?
Honestly if I were a model, you'd freak the crap out of me.

Jan 05 15 09:29 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

Princess_Ariel wrote:
i would love some

I would consider it to be pretty bad. Half your pics are from the same shoot, and they are not particularly creative.

Jan 05 15 09:31 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

David K Studio wrote:
Yes

I love your work, it is super simple, but looks awesome. I'd like to see a little more variety, but just a suggestion... And your models are amazing too.

Jan 05 15 09:32 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

thx1137 wrote:
Would love to hear your thoughts too.

Nothing special here, specially after what you write on your profile, it just sounds like BS.

Jan 05 15 09:34 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

Tyler A Photography wrote:
I would like an honest critique please.

Its pretty bad, you have 3 shoots all together. And the one who you don't use a light, it is shaky as hell, and looks like not by choice.

Jan 05 15 09:36 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

Torttu Doris wrote:
I'd like an honest evaluation to, please and thank you smile

Your port is beautiful! and so are you!

Jan 05 15 09:39 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

Annie  S wrote:
Let me know?

Nothing special, but potential. Just work on your expressions, as they are all the same in every pic.

Jan 05 15 09:43 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

Williamxzy wrote:
ok

I wish I had bleach so I could use it on my eyes to remove the repetitive image of your penis on my retina.
As much as it pains me to say this, there are some really cool images on your port, but hands down you give off the creepiest vibe. There should be the creepy awards of mm, you'd def. make top 10. Tone it down, specially with the touching of the very young girls which those pics are completely gratuitous, like no artistic value to them.

Jan 05 15 09:46 am Link

Photographer

KeithWJordan

Posts: 65

Boynton Beach, Florida, US

I'll play. Thanks in advance.

Jan 06 15 07:17 pm Link

Model

Shirin Brigitte

Posts: 379

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Please hit me hard.

Jan 07 15 07:15 am Link

Photographer

Black Label Boudoir

Posts: 7

Lake Oswego, Oregon, US

Love to hear what you have to say smile

Jan 07 15 10:14 am Link

Model

_eMMe_

Posts: 866

Florence, Toscana, Italy

I would love to have every kind of critics from you smile

Jan 07 15 11:10 am Link

Photographer

Colorado Figures

Posts: 825

Loveland, Colorado, US

I would very much like an honest critique.  Thank you in advance for taking the time to share your knowledge.

Jan 12 15 12:59 pm Link

Photographer

brunoalves

Posts: 12

Rio de Janeiro, Rio de Janeiro, Brazil

I'd love an honest critique

Jan 12 15 02:53 pm Link

Photographer

nsilvaphoto

Posts: 28

London, England, United Kingdom

Hello,
If you are still doing it, yes please.
More images on my website at http://www.nunodasilva.com/p663787366
Thank you,
Nuno

Jan 16 15 07:58 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

Starting up again! I just finished re arranging my whole port. it took me forever and ever and ever! so any input is much appreciated. In the meantime, submit to me slaves!

Mar 09 15 08:40 pm Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

KeithWJordan wrote:
I'll play. Thanks in advance.

Nothing special really... Its not terrible, but would not take a second look at it.

Mar 11 15 06:49 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

Shirin McBennett-Sheen wrote:
Please hit me hard.

I love your look! And love the chicken on your chest, I really do. I would just edit and delete two or so pics form your port.

Mar 11 15 06:51 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

Double L Photography  wrote:
Love to hear what you have to say smile

You have some really great shots, but most of all very good concepts, however you can really edit down your port to 1/3 of what you have up. It gets a little repetitive, and some of them are terrible (last pic on your port sucks). Also the way you have set up your albums make it super annoying to look through them.
  Last thought, I would invest a little $ on using some amazing models, no offense but it looks like you are using your local "artistic" dancing joint as a source of talent.... Nothing wrong with that, but you are not getting quality models.

Mar 11 15 06:57 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

_eMMe_ wrote:
I would love to have every kind of critics from you smile

I don't know... I love the photography, I love your look, but its hard to judge you as a model there, I think you need more, and a little more variety, but I love the pics...
And for the first time in a review I'm going to be inappropriate and say you have amazing boobs.

Mar 11 15 07:00 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

Colorado Figures  wrote:
I would very much like an honest critique.  Thank you in advance for taking the time to share your knowledge.

You sir get an award, you managed to creep me out... You have a couple of quite good images, but the rest for some reason creep me the f out, and some are just good old fashion tacky and cheesy, and make me feel sleazy even just looking at them. Girl on the tracks with jeans and legs super wide open, that one is an example of horrible. Girl titty f(#$ing the ice cream is one of the wtf sleazy ones.

Mar 11 15 07:04 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

brunoalves wrote:
I'd love an honest critique

If you keep working on that lighting technique to the point where it is not that washed out anymore, you will do great with high school portraits. Seriously I think you can get a little more creative than that.

Mar 11 15 07:06 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

nsilvaphoto wrote:
Hello,
If you are still doing it, yes please.
More images on my website at http://www.nunodasilva.com/p663787366
Thank you,
Nuno

Not bad at all, I actually quite like the first pic. I would get rid of two or three of them, but very nice.

Mar 11 15 07:07 am Link

Photographer

Melissa Wenger

Posts: 251

Virginia Beach, Virginia, US

Hey, did I get skipped?!?  I'd love to hear your thoughts!

Mar 11 15 04:32 pm Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

Melissa Wenger wrote:
Hey, did I get skipped?!?  I'd love to hear your thoughts!

You may have... and I do apologize.
So... You really can't have a bunch of pictures from the same shoot, specially if they all look the same or so similar! makes you look like you've only done a handful of shoots, and are super proud of that last one and just want to show it off.... Kind of like the mom who has a retarded kid, but is super proud because the freaking kid can spell house by the age of 9, and they really do think their kid is smarter than the rest...
Anyway, back to the pics... They are ok, quite a few of them are washed out in color, bad photoshop, but at the end of the day, it is not all that bad... Your best are the guys.

Mar 13 15 10:47 am Link

Photographer

Tony Tones Images

Posts: 6

Vero Beach, Florida, US

Ok let's hear it. What ya got for me.

Mar 13 15 11:26 am Link

Photographer

camilo

Posts: 794

Miami, Florida, US

Alaimophotography wrote:
Ok let's hear it. What ya got for me.

You have 2 decent ones, one passable, and the rest are crap, there needs to be a little more connection with your subjects.

Mar 17 15 12:34 pm Link

Model

Arielle Sydney

Posts: 5

London, England, United Kingdom

I'd appreciate an honest critique. Thanks in advance!

Mar 19 15 06:57 am Link