Cairo, Cairo, Egypt
Critique My last work
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 3#28693293
Jun 08 12 10:46 am Link
Ankara, Ankara, Turkey
Shows alot of skill and I like shiny...skin is not as good as its required lately but overall some good work ın my opinion.
Jun 08 12 07:42 pm Link
Chapel Hill, North Carolina, US
I like everything about it except for the skin/highlights on the left cheek. Love the rest of the shinies though:)
Jun 08 12 11:48 pm Link
Bucharest, Bucharest, Romania
I feel that the shine its a little bit overdone, especially above lips. The main problem is hair. It looks cut, therefore artificial, i think its best if you leave some few rebel. The skin texture looks good to me but im not a retoucher.
Jun 09 12 10:02 am Link
London, England, United Kingdom
I have impression you know what direction to head to. This photo needs to pop out. Just for my taste it is overdone I am talking about adding shine/contouring highlights. I would think glasses should be the centre of the shine here after all.You also have quiet brutal way of shaping/curving, transitions are too hard, skin tones are generalised, little of variation though I see you added red yellow green to be there. My guess you added white(or ish) and blurred it . I used to do it a few moths ago someone advised me not to do it and I stopped.Now I am quiet glad I don't do it any more. This technique is quiet harsh. try to have a second go on this image do your 100% be honest with your self.compare them later. I really like those glasses though
Jun 10 12 11:28 am Link
Boston, Massachusetts, US
Now this is what i truly LOVE to see, stunning truly...
Id love to see a scree capture of this workflow or possibly even a tut, any thoughts?
possibly a wickkked low res PSD?
Jun 20 12 11:22 am Link