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Jeffrey M Fletcher

Posts: 4370

Asheville, North Carolina, US

KonstantKarma wrote:
Now I have to know who Warren is.

and if that's the end, that's good.

Jun 17 12 06:11 am Link

Photographer

J I M

Posts: 524

New York, New York, US

Jeffrey M Fletcher wrote:
How's it hit you?

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 2#28767992 18+

The image is a good start. The green and red are a bit too 'cartoony' for me. As I look at it in the context of your portfolio, the thing that 'needs work,' if that is the right way to put it, is in the post production; needs to look a little more like the aesthetic of your other works.

Jun 17 12 06:14 am Link