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RL Post Production

Posts: 12

San Antonio, Texas, US

I did this shoot with a reflector for the first time and I was just wondering what you guys think I need to work on or what are some things that could help? Thanks!!

http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5343/7399813708_4d9afaa271.jpg
http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5076/7399814336_7272d831e0.jpg
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M2 by robbylozano11, on Flickr
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8157/7399812022_6d47696d4a.jpg

[url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/27459067@N02/7399816238/]http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7100/7399816238_0fe5a57329.jpg
[url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/27459067@N02/7399815096/]http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7103/7399815096_e4cf43bc3a.jpg
[url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/27459067@N02/7399812716/]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8163/7399812716_1852164127.jpg
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7234/7399817198_9ec8c6abc5.jpg

Jun 19 12 12:15 am Link

Retoucher

Paul Snyder

Posts: 89

Columbus, Ohio, US

Hmm. Well your post seems a bit vague.

Considering that these are pretty standard outdoor portrait shots, I wouldn't recommend you do too much to them.

Jun 19 12 07:36 pm Link

Photographer

Brick Wilson

Posts: 370

Carol Stream, Illinois, US

The first step is to lower your exposure to avoid the blown highlights on the model and background.

Jun 22 12 11:52 am Link

Retoucher

REVIVE retouch

Posts: 63

Margate, England, United Kingdom

i like them ,nice shots

Jun 22 12 11:53 am Link

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PhotoVision

Posts: 100

New York, New York, US

Giant.. dark blotchy spot on her chest and neck. Must... be... color corrected X.X

Jul 25 12 01:12 pm Link