Forums > Critique > Does your Avatar make me want to see your port?

Photographer

Hunter Lea Photography

Posts: 6

Portland, Oregon, US

Feedback of any kind is good.

Mar 18 13 09:18 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6388

Champaign, Illinois, US

Lilly Rae wrote:
So what about mine? Ive been wanting to change it for a while, but have had many good responses.

It is good and I like it. Probably yes

Mar 18 13 09:18 pm Link

Photographer

R O

Posts: 51

Denver, Colorado, US

ooo, me!

Mar 18 13 09:20 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6388

Champaign, Illinois, US

Michelle White wrote:
my turn.

Probably not. IMO you have many others that would serve you better

Mar 18 13 09:20 pm Link

Model

Michelle White

Posts: 39

Moline, Illinois, US

better now? lol

Mar 18 13 09:21 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6388

Champaign, Illinois, US

R O  wrote:
ooo, me!

Def. yes

Mar 18 13 09:21 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6388

Champaign, Illinois, US

Hunter Lea Photography wrote:
Feedback of any kind is good.

I like the shot. But it really doesn't have anything to draw me in

Mar 18 13 09:22 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6388

Champaign, Illinois, US

Michelle White wrote:
better now? lol

much!

yes!!

Mar 18 13 09:22 pm Link

Model

Michelle White

Posts: 39

Moline, Illinois, US

smile XOXO

Mar 18 13 09:23 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6388

Champaign, Illinois, US

cwwmbm wrote:
I'd love to play as well smile

The coloring and brightness are good, but beyond that probably not

Mar 18 13 09:23 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6388

Champaign, Illinois, US

Celine Cardona wrote:
please tell me

sorry Celine, probably not

Mar 18 13 09:25 pm Link

Photographer

MikeyBoy

Posts: 633

Milltown, Wisconsin, US

.... hit me up, Sparky ! smile

Mar 18 13 09:26 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6388

Champaign, Illinois, US

Leone P wrote:
Hey!
I have joined in this game in the past and you have liked my Avatar but what i would like to know is this.. Is there an image in my port that wold make a better Avatar? x

yes, IMO this is by far your best choice for avatar:

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31982093

Mar 18 13 09:27 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6388

Champaign, Illinois, US

MikeyBoy wrote:
.... hit me up, Sparky ! smile

How did you know my name?  ;-)

I love your port!! But the current avatar doesn't do you justice. IMO you have many works which would make a better avi

Mar 18 13 09:28 pm Link

Model

Kristin Kaye

Posts: 14

Findlay, Ohio, US

I'll play smile

Mar 18 13 09:41 pm Link

Photographer

Vivendi Studio

Posts: 249

Los Angeles, California, US

how about mine?

Mar 18 13 09:47 pm Link

Model

Celine Sophia

Posts: 503

Santa Barbara, California, US

Thank you.  Your opinion just wants to make me work until I get it right.

Mar 18 13 11:06 pm Link

Photographer

Soli Event Photography

Posts: 3

Carlsbad, New Mexico, US

I'm game. It's one way to get better

Mar 18 13 11:12 pm Link

Photographer

Keddy Davis

Posts: 187

Birmingham, England, United Kingdom

Peach Jones wrote:

The lack of brighter color may hurt you, but the subject is nice. 60-70% yes

Well, that's definitely better than a No Way José lol.

Thanks smile

Mar 19 13 01:02 am Link

Model

Leone P

Posts: 515

Batley, England, United Kingdom

Peach Jones wrote:

yes, IMO this is by far your best choice for avatar:

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31982093

Thankyou, changed, smile

Mar 19 13 03:36 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6388

Champaign, Illinois, US

Kristin Kaye wrote:
I'll play smile

Well, first of all your port rocks. Fabulous tummy!! The lack of color may hurt you a bit in getting noticed, but beyond that it is a yes. And if I can be so bold, IMO this works a bit better as an avi because of the bright color.....esp red:

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31196696

Mar 19 13 06:15 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6388

Champaign, Illinois, US

Kristin Kaye wrote:
I'll play smile

Well, first of all your port rocks. Fabulous tummy!! The lack of color may hurt you a bit in getting noticed, but beyond that it is a yes. And if I can be so bold, IMO this works a bit better as an avi because of the bright color.....esp red:

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31196696

Mar 19 13 06:15 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6388

Champaign, Illinois, US

Vivendi Studio wrote:
how about mine?

Well, probably not. It isn't a bad shot by any means, but IMO you have others in your port that have much better pop

Mar 19 13 06:17 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6388

Champaign, Illinois, US

Soli Event Photography wrote:
I'm game. It's one way to get better

It is probably your best shot in your port for an avatar. But the blown out skin makes it look a bit "cheap" and makes me thing GWC. Just my opinion, so the answer would most likely be no.

If you can rework the photo so that the photo is not so blown out then I think it may look better. Thanks for stopping by and good luck!

Mar 19 13 06:20 am Link

Photographer

Dan Brady

Posts: 610

Perth, Western Australia, Australia

peach

tell me

tell me peach

do it. do it

x

Mar 19 13 06:27 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6388

Champaign, Illinois, US

Dan Brady wrote:
peach

tell me

tell me peach

do it. do it

x

Should I do it?

haha

Yes, I like your colors and creativity. 75% yes

Mar 19 13 07:49 am Link

Photographer

Dan Brady

Posts: 610

Perth, Western Australia, Australia

Peach Jones wrote:

Should I do it?

haha

Yes, I like your colors and creativity. 75% yes

Thanks big_smile

Mar 19 13 08:55 am Link

Photographer

Josh Evans Photography

Posts: 14

Boothwyn, Pennsylvania, US

Sure why not, have at it.

Mar 19 13 08:59 am Link

Photographer

Mmmfire photography

Posts: 27

Chelmsford, England, United Kingdom

Can I play if you're still game please?

Mar 19 13 09:01 am Link

Model

Tamasha Sayidana

Posts: 15

Washington, District of Columbia, US

I'll play along!

Mar 19 13 09:02 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6388

Champaign, Illinois, US

Josh Evans Photography wrote:
Sure why not, have at it.

I like the pose, but the darkness and lack of color will hurt you. Probably not

Mar 19 13 10:30 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6388

Champaign, Illinois, US

Mmmfire photography wrote:
Can I play if you're still game please?

Good color and contrast to get the initial look, but not enough pop to make me want to see more

Mar 19 13 10:36 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6388

Champaign, Illinois, US

Tamasha Sayidana wrote:
I'll play along!

sorry Tamasha, but I can't even tell what it is. You have quite a few in your port that would serve you much better IMO

Mar 19 13 10:38 am Link

Model

Nichole Golinvaux

Posts: 3

Pueblo, Colorado, US

Mirror, mirror on the wall......... smile

Mar 19 13 01:21 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6388

Champaign, Illinois, US

NicholeSG wrote:
Mirror, mirror on the wall......... smile

........who has the most magnificent legs of them all?

You do Nichole......you do!  :-)

Actually, I do remember going through Spearfish Canyon many years ago. Awesome!! I will always remember it.

You avi.......it isn't bad, as your legs and tummy are working for you. but I would say only 50%. IMO, your tummy and legs (the boots get it!) look even sexier in this shot, and would be better for getting my attention, and therefore wanting me to see your port:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31807025

Great Work!!

Mar 19 13 01:45 pm Link

Photographer

mgburke

Posts: 428

Brooklyn, New York, US

hmmm i wonder?

Mar 19 13 01:50 pm Link

Photographer

Mike Williams Photo

Posts: 125

Chattanooga, Tennessee, US

I'm game.

Mar 19 13 01:56 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6388

Champaign, Illinois, US

mgburke wrote:
hmmm i wonder?

very beautiful.......80% yes

Mar 19 13 02:27 pm Link

Model

Nichole Golinvaux

Posts: 3

Pueblo, Colorado, US

Peach Jones wrote:

........who has the most magnificent legs of them all?

You do Nichole......you do!  :-)

Actually, I do remember going through Spearfish Canyon many years ago. Awesome!! I will always remember it.

You avi.......it isn't bad, as your legs and tummy are working for you. but I would say only 50%. IMO, your tummy and legs (the boots get it!) look even sexier in this shot, and would be better for getting my attention, and therefore wanting me to see your port:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31807025

Great Work!!

Appreciate the feedback and thanks for the list adds smile  Yes Spearfish Canyon is so beautiful.

Mar 19 13 04:05 pm Link

Photographer

name removed3

Posts: 264

Boston, Massachusetts, US

does mine?

Mar 19 13 04:08 pm Link