***oops, I didn't post this in the critique section, my apologies. I'd move it in there if I could, but I don't think we have those privileges.

Hello,

This is my second time retouching a photo for practice. I would like to ask for specific help but truthfully after awhile I got so focused on dodging and burning I kind of just lost direction.

So any suggestions on better transitions or whatever would be helpful. Thank you so much in advance.


http://crystal-nguyen.com/images/BA.jpg